| Re: Billy Collins by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 68.183.245.156 |
14-Aug-08/3:55 PM |
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My name is not Billy Collins
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| Re: 5 minute poem: section by Bill Z Bub |
Bethy 165.154.46.180 |
2-Sep-08/9:16 AM |
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| Re: Better Things by EAger to Offend |
Bill Z Bub 99.239.12.102 |
21-Aug-08/7:59 PM |
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| Re: ayow by skaskowski |
INTRANSIT 69.23.141.215 |
15-Aug-08/4:59 PM |
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| Re: enter, do. let up, let loose. by FreeFormFixation |
SupremeDreamer 99.170.144.252 |
21-Aug-08/9:08 PM |
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Clever.. though the elephant bit befuddled me slightly.
Blessed with eight.
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| Re: Are your eyes by hobojo |
SupremeDreamer 99.170.144.252 |
21-Aug-08/9:10 PM |
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The symplistic rhyme is why I give a six rather than a seven.
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| Re: Gadgets and Poems by Dovina |
INTRANSIT 69.23.141.215 |
17-Aug-08/4:16 PM |
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D, I think the whole first sentence should go. I'd like to see the carpets rise be your opener. But that's me. hope you and Kansas are doing fine.
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| Re: Gadgets and Poems by Dovina |
Bethy 165.154.46.180 |
2-Sep-08/9:00 AM |
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I have wonderful memories like these as well.
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| Re: 5 minute poem: section by Bill Z Bub |
SupremeDreamer 99.170.144.252 |
21-Aug-08/9:07 PM |
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It is good to see you posting again, its good to see some new work from the old guard.
Blessed with nine.
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| Re: Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp |
Bethy 165.154.46.180 |
2-Sep-08/9:05 AM |
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Ha Ha good fun!! Did I mention I teach...
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| Re: Warlord by INTRANSIT |
Bethy 165.154.46.180 |
2-Sep-08/9:03 AM |
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worn boots that don't know snow...good line...
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| Re: Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp |
T. Jonathron Remp 128.83.157.120 |
27-Aug-08/4:21 PM |
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You are all the product of VIRAL SOCIAL STUDIES MIND POISON!!!!!!
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| Re: Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet |
Bethy 165.154.46.180 |
2-Sep-08/9:12 AM |
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Crazy as it may seem, there is actually a story in this horrid evening of a "high" I prefer the natural high, (air) but to each his own.
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| Re: Hum by Nepanthe |
Bethy 165.154.46.180 |
2-Sep-08/9:41 AM |
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excellent intro, middle and end...a full-bodied poem :)
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| Re: Warlord by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 68.183.245.156 |
14-Aug-08/3:51 PM |
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Funny, the greener pasture and all that bovine fantasy. loved America / Loathed America - perfect.
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| Re: GOD'S MOST WONDERFUL CREATION by iowajerms |
Dovina 68.183.245.156 |
14-Aug-08/3:52 PM |
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| Re: Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp |
Dovina 68.183.245.156 |
14-Aug-08/3:54 PM |
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Swallow it, you idiot! It's what you really want
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| Re: WISHES SHE COULD FORGET and FLOWERS BY THE ROCK by iowajerms |
Blindpoetry 70.189.1.177 |
7-Aug-08/3:45 PM |
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Why do you add two poems? Is it because you couldn't wait to hear how awful your stuff is?
"oh but, you know, they're both talking about the same thing. it's really-"
FUCK. OKAY.
Well just fix the last two rhymes in the first poem. Too much... force. Didn't flow well at all compared to the rest.
The second poem, I find not horrible.
How do you expect to rate this? I'm actually gonna rate this and you put me a predicament. thanks.
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| Re: rainfall saga 7 by Bill Z Bub |
FreeFormFixation 98.212.148.58 |
19-Aug-08/8:14 PM |
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sounds like rain to me, i like it
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| Re: About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote |
hobojo 24.143.147.163 |
12-Aug-08/12:15 AM |
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