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poodietat 68.51.106.137 |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
poodietat 68.51.106.137 |
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| Re: The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
14-Mar-05/1:44 PM |
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How could an omnipotent, omniscient being make a mastake? Two words: Free Willy.
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| Re: The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
14-Mar-05/1:51 PM |
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Would you like to live in a boothe?
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| Re: The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle |
edpeterson 68.79.58.164 |
14-Mar-05/5:29 PM |
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This is a bulging turnip.
"Frankly I'd rather fair my chances among men." What could this mean?
their?
"their are two testaments." Please pick out the egregious crime against language contained this phrase.
clearly "testaments" should be "testicles"
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| Re: The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
edpeterson 68.79.58.164 |
14-Mar-05/5:33 PM |
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A G Q X R Z T G G W T
s i q x u g g w w a a
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| Re: The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
edpeterson 68.79.58.164 |
14-Mar-05/5:34 PM |
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. . . . . . . . . . . . .
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| Re: Gabriel by tadpole |
sliver 198.81.26.47 |
14-Mar-05/7:49 PM |
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A good image, I just like the way it sounds.
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poodietat 68.51.106.137 |
15-Mar-05/9:58 AM |
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There might be a pony in here somewhere, but mainly it's just shit. This concept holds promise:
then watch the eleven oâclock news.
Sometimes I imagine Iâm just
watching another Really Bad SNL,
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| Re: Delusions Of A Peaceful Place by Stacy Stewart |
poodietat 68.51.106.137 |
15-Mar-05/10:01 AM |
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"a victory lost to a bittersweet -- defeat."
I'm not sure what the victory would have been. As I read it, the poem is solely about defeat.
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| Re: history by whispern_smoke_wisp |
zodiac 212.118.11.13 |
14-Mar-05/9:53 PM |
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The past is dirtier and quite a bit more smelly; the future has flying cars and onepiece spandex suits for everybody.
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| Re: Life by that_funny_girl |
zodiac 212.118.11.13 |
14-Mar-05/9:56 PM |
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Please stop posting all your awful poems at the same time.
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| Re: On Reading by the_poetess |
zodiac 212.118.11.13 |
14-Mar-05/9:57 PM |
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Please stop posting all your awful poems at the same time.
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zodiac 212.118.11.13 |
14-Mar-05/10:02 PM |
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Contrary to popular belief, inter-cousin or inter-sibling marriages pose negligible additional risk for the offspring over one generation.
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| Re: You took my half dozen (revised) by poodietat |
zodiac 212.118.11.13 |
14-Mar-05/10:09 PM |
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The most untrue part of this is "didn't remember how good it felt". It probably didn't.
This is crap jock fantasy. Surprising considering the source.
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| Re: Never Did You by Dreammaker1024 |
zodiac 212.118.11.13 |
14-Mar-05/10:15 PM |
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PS-When did you realize it was all going wrong? Was it when he ruptured Ms Dupree's bag of waters with his teeth for a bizarre party gag?
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| Re: Sauvignon by Dovina |
poodietat 68.51.106.137 |
14-Mar-05/10:33 PM |
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Funny, yes. Poetry, afraid not. 8 for the laugh.
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| Re: Peridot by horus8 |
edpeterson 68.79.58.164 |
15-Mar-05/8:55 AM |
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One of my favorites by you. Right up there with Temporal, imho
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| Re: Delusions Of A Peaceful Place by Stacy Stewart |
edpeterson 68.79.58.164 |
15-Mar-05/9:02 AM |
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I think this is poetic and potentially potent.
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| Re: JJâs Church by Dovina |
edpeterson 68.79.58.164 |
15-Mar-05/9:05 AM |
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Substitutionary is funny. Dyn-O-MITE!
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