Re: Extra Strength VaginexII (Free curse) by Wurt Kale by Shardik	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/7:11 PM
Damn...this shit is nasty
Re: Night Work by forestchild7	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/7:13 PM
Are u a writer....i mean do you write stories? this was kool..kind of
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	edpeterson 68.79.203.220	25-Feb-05/6:06 AM
The poem: Brilliant. The order is perfect as is the length.
Re: Forgettable by Angelofpain25	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:49 PM
uh... at least i get what you're trying to say....
Re: I DON'T SMILE ANYMORE by longships	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:52 PM
uh?
Re: Northern Ireland by longships	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:53 PM
Exciting!!!!
Re: Adolescence by PoeticDelicacy	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:57 PM
Very provocative
Re: Sunset Cycle by Jsylum	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/7:00 PM
Beautiful imagery..
Re: Captured Moment by hummers86	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/7:04 PM
Great theme
Re: Mother you are not winter! by kawakurdi	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/7:07 PM
Awwwww this is sad
Re: It’s the Management by Dovina	jroday 204.215.33.245	25-Feb-05/2:26 AM
Same damn thing happens here in Florida.When we get a hurricane warning, and they tell everyone to seek shelter. Management will tell some of there workers if they don't come to work there fired, and you have some fools that will try to go.
Re: Corner Shop, 5 Quinton Road by Caducus	Caducus 172.212.169.203	25-Feb-05/3:19 AM
I'm such a bastard should i keep it open and add it to my woefully low 'happy' collection.
Re: Corner Shop, 5 Quinton Road by Caducus	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.67	25-Feb-05/6:41 AM
Well, you sent me to the dictionary. 3 points. I'm okay with girning and cantering, damson is a reach. 2 points. The construction is overall solid. 2 points. The puntuation is good,somethings fishy about the opening line. Maybe a bit run on. It's also visually well balanced. 2 points. It's definitely worth "finishing".
Re: It’s the Management by Dovina	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.67	25-Feb-05/6:44 AM
Boss.
Re: Untitled by MacFrantic	Dovina 12.72.5.162	25-Feb-05/6:59 AM
Line 2: sayest is singular, they plural. Line 3: use "thee" to stay with the old English. Line 4: the beat is off. Try morn delays. That's as far as I got. You've got the old (yawn)English voice alright.
Re: The Voice by jroday	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.185	25-Feb-05/2:35 PM
You know some of these people don't understand what the hell you are saying
Re: It’s the Management by Dovina	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.185	25-Feb-05/2:39 PM
Boss Man! Your fried!
Re: domination by midnight	DevilBuni 149.152.192.18	25-Feb-05/7:32 PM
I really like enjoyed this poem :) Very nice
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	25-Feb-05/8:10 PM
Super, Ed. Glad to see you back.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	25-Feb-05/8:14 PM
Another great one.