regarding some deleted poem...	Crakyamuni 131.252.183.26	23-Feb-05/8:00 PM
I suck.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	24-Feb-05/7:52 AM
This poem reaches deep into the dark anus of failure and pulls out a plump loaf of such proportions it would embarass Violet Suede.
Re: My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Dovina 12.72.5.145	24-Feb-05/8:19 AM
These coded interactions are interesting for riddle and bravery to risk discovery. Among the angst though are a few good lines - "Fact wrapped around fiction" because it's the opposite of the usual fiction wrapped around fact.
Re: Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8	Crakyamuni 131.252.183.26	23-Feb-05/7:58 PM
Honestly I'm illiterate, but goddamn, this was an inspiration. I have never read anything as good on this site. This may be an insult to you blue bloods, but I'm in love with this poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.72.5.145	24-Feb-05/8:23 AM
The last three lines blow it. How could you feel everything she does?
Re: The End of the Affair by jessicazee	Dovina 12.72.5.145	24-Feb-05/8:34 AM
Scratch the first line. Line break after "teeth." I like this a lot!
Re: Invisible Wounds by Fearlesfan_04	Dovina 12.72.5.145	24-Feb-05/8:36 AM
Okay you have wounds, but that's about all it says. Fancy spacing and repetition cannot make it better.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67	24-Feb-05/9:14 AM
My turn: In the beginning, it was simply the road that drew me. Black asphalt - a serpentine layer of coils laid down across the mountain, like God himself had decided to play with a cowboy lariat and , having tired of the game , let it fall in twisted folds to the ground. Theres more poetry in this opening paragraph from a motorcycle magazine than in all of what you've posted on Poemranker. It may be acrostic, but that's all. the problem is not us dear. It's you. When you start reading deeper poetry , then you'll start writing deeper poetry. Then the nasty comments will slide away like the snowmelt under the early spring sun.
Re: They that do not scream by INTRANSIT	Dovina 17.255.240.6	24-Feb-05/1:04 PM
Yeah, good point. Ignore the screaming malcontents with their petty little gripes and open the window for the mantis.
Re: Invisible Wounds by Fearlesfan_04	RION12 64.136.26.226	24-Feb-05/6:22 PM
I liked it. I will say the truth and say it is not the best but it's good. Keep writing and you will get better at it.
Re: Violent Storm by Fearlesfan_04	RION12 64.136.26.226	24-Feb-05/6:31 PM
What is the theme of the poem?
Re: The Green Emerald by ruella	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:32 PM
This makes no since to me....all i have to say is write when u feel emotion
Re: father by girlandwords	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:33 PM
THIS ROCKS ...see..ruella now thats emotion and thats writing
Re: You by Butterflies	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:35 PM
i love this one to... i can relate to it.....
regarding some deleted poem...	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:36 PM
This is prety good.....
Re: Am I forgiven by da_dark_wan	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:37 PM
no structure or thought .....i dunno are u forgiven?
Re: Calling My Essence From The Gap by Rainbow_chaser	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:39 PM
this has so much meaning and feeling...i love it
Re: She was supposedly yours... as was I by Katzclear	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:42 PM
Love it...t
Re: Home sweet home by nicole081083	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:45 PM
I liked it
Re: Still Alone by RION12	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/6:48 PM
you don't need to feel that way...but the poem was ok keep writing