| Re: Little Fly by PodPoet |
edpeterson 68.79.203.220 |
23-Feb-05/8:17 AM |
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edpeterson 68.79.203.220 |
23-Feb-05/8:45 AM |
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a shoe's embrace is kinda funny. and the title is funny too. IN fact, the whole thing is kinda funny.
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dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135 |
23-Feb-05/7:05 PM |
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i cannot believe this poem is currently ranked first, not only is it very cliche, but the rhyming is not very well done
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thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.42.248.88 |
23-Feb-05/7:47 PM |
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Iron town, is a name for a prison, none in specific, just like the joint, the slammer, the iron town. I wouldn't say anything but... it was kind of the point of the, I've served my time, line.
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| Re: dot.com by PodPoet |
Dovina 12.72.10.107 |
23-Feb-05/6:55 AM |
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Must you keep recycling this just to get it on top of the Recent List?
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INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67 |
23-Feb-05/6:56 AM |
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"poorly disguised appeals to pedophilia" Righton.
How about those nasty appeals to adultophilia? Nobody cares about the adults any more.
toally good. totally.
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| Re: Getting Pumped Up to Get Laid by PodPoet |
edpeterson 68.79.203.220 |
23-Feb-05/7:46 AM |
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edpeterson 68.79.203.220 |
23-Feb-05/8:07 AM |
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I love to laugh, long and loud and clear
It's getting worse every year
"Longing that this is not a one time event"
I think you do this on purpose, just to see what the critics will say.
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edpeterson 68.79.203.220 |
23-Feb-05/8:10 AM |
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i have misplaced my decoder ring.
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| Re: Jack and Jill by Dovina |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
23-Feb-05/10:35 AM |
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I'd better velcro my richtometer down in case
the girder gives.
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| Re: Whemying by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.2 |
23-Feb-05/1:34 PM |
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Dear Fraser:
As the originator of the term "whemying," I congratulate you on a supremely fine piece
of work! What rhyme, meter, and a few
wonderful words can do..... especially when
paired together with such a sweet concept as
that of whemying.......... BRAVO TO YOU!!!
Doug Soderstrom
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| Re: Hide by MarchingMan56 |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
23-Feb-05/2:14 PM |
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The way you re-write cliche is... Cliche.
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
23-Feb-05/2:17 PM |
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Woah, best shit ever.
I know her, lol
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
23-Feb-05/2:21 PM |
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I pray for the day you accidentally get too drunk
and face first a twelve inch nigger shaft with your left nostril. you and your stupid fucking bunny, and both your shit writing, GOD.
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
23-Feb-05/2:21 PM |
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By the way, this isn't an acrostic, it's a pathetic.
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| Re: Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8 |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.223 |
23-Feb-05/4:11 PM |
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My favourite bit is "Geffen passed around a wooden box full of drugs."
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| Re: My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
Crakyamuni 131.252.183.26 |
23-Feb-05/7:51 PM |
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A sense of "doom" here. I like that. Our words mean everything, especially "mine". Paint it black and "red", and add a bunny with a snake body.
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| Re: Hunger by Dovina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.223 |
23-Feb-05/4:16 PM |
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| Re: Into the Wreckage by zodiac |
Dreammaker1024 198.146.102.83 |
23-Feb-05/5:28 PM |
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I enjoyed it, More than I you know. There are ways I would like to explain what I think of it to u, but I doubt they would do justice. So I'll leave it at this; beyond mere idea.
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| Re: Hunter Thompson, In The Off Beat Chance Of Cunnilingus by horus8 |
Crakyamuni 131.252.183.26 |
23-Feb-05/7:55 PM |
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