Re: dot.com by PodPoet	tadpole 24.55.116.186	12-Feb-05/11:59 AM
well it's original, but that's about it
Re: Simple by wilco	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:22 PM
wonderful, absolutely wonderful! almost a favorite. *10*
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:25 PM
hardly concrete, but I do enjoy the first stanza. *7*
Re: Dreamtigers (Borges) by Sasha	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:29 PM
Only major problem- other than the whole "prose" thing-is the large space near the end. Find some way to fix it. *7* (I automatically deduct 1 point for prose, sorry)
Re: dot.com by PodPoet	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:31 PM
3 dot.coms send the message. *4*
Re: Blood and roses. by backstreetdreamer	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:34 PM
I can't believe I'm saying this, but if this had actually been a prose poem, I might have given it a higher score. And don't use "evermore" ever or more. *8*
Re: Kiss of a rose by backstreetdreamer	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:35 PM
Why not just call it "The Name of the Rose" *5*
Re: My Angel by jroday	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:38 PM
Interesting venture. The structure could use some work. *6*
Re: Orion takes aim by oneglove	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:39 PM
Oh, please get rid of L4. *7*
Re: CUPID by al-naafiysh	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:42 PM
Man, that was such an entertaining poem! Little changes here and there-I won't be specific- and it's perfect! *10* Can you put a single stanza in your "favorites" section?
Re: Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:45 PM
definitely needs a line that stands out. *7*
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/7:46 PM
good ending. *8*
Re: Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina	wilco 24.165.207.93	12-Feb-05/8:24 PM
Reminds me of...oh, whats that thing from church...about forgiving those who trespass....I don;t know....been a long time. Anyway, I think that this was a "I need something to post poem (sorry, not trying to be mean). I just know what you're capable of and I expect more. You know I got much love for ya. ;)
Re: Bridesmaids in the Rain by wilco	MacFrantic 152.163.100.67	12-Feb-05/8:25 PM
so good, very nice picture. *9*
Re: Valentine's Day is Two Days Away and I Don't Feel Loved by MacFrantic	wilco 24.165.207.93	12-Feb-05/8:25 PM
Not loving the poem so much, but I like the title a lot. So, *7*.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.165.207.93	12-Feb-05/8:26 PM
what?
Re: Dreamtigers (Borges) by Sasha	wilco 24.165.207.93	12-Feb-05/8:29 PM
I like it, but I'm guessing it's a translation. Now, I can respect the work you put into a translation, but I don't feel that's it's an original work (and I've heard the debates.) Good job, but I will hold my vote. P.S.-If I'm wrong and it's an original, let me know and I'll vote.
Re: Starless by MacFrantic	wilco 24.165.207.93	12-Feb-05/8:31 PM
As I've made no secret, I'm not a big fan of modern poetry that sounds like it was written 200 years ago. Still, it's not too bad so I'll vote 6. Note-200 years ago, I'd have given it an 8.
Re: dot.com by PodPoet	wilco 24.165.207.93	12-Feb-05/8:32 PM
nope
Re: Blood and roses. by backstreetdreamer	wilco 24.165.207.93	12-Feb-05/8:34 PM
I'd change the end to forever. Not bad overall...