Re: Recess by horus8	7!3 219.95.8.236	10-Feb-05/5:38 AM
nice :)
Re: charred pixels by FreeFormFixation	7!3 219.95.8.236	10-Feb-05/5:44 AM
not bad.
Re: Beating heart by celticskatermatt1	Dovina 12.72.4.192	10-Feb-05/8:04 AM
Good up through line 3, except for spelling. After that it gets trite.
Re: A Metahaiku by dbond	Dovina 12.72.4.192	10-Feb-05/8:06 AM
What's kigo?
Re: The Tree by Joe-joe	7!3 219.95.8.236	10-Feb-05/5:55 AM
nice :)!
Re: The Sleep Fantastic by nentwined	Dovina 12.72.4.192	10-Feb-05/7:56 AM
You're being imbic with a myth-like tale. But in a few places you sacrifice clarity for it. In Line 6, I thought "was" is distracting. And if being imbic is important, then why the lapse in Veres 3. Line 3? Like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.72.4.192	10-Feb-05/8:01 AM
You've got a good flow going until the last verse. I like what it says, but rhythm seems to falter in the last two lines, and the rhyme is not exact.
regarding some deleted poem...	celticskatermatt1 68.7.189.144	9-Feb-05/4:40 PM
nice but weird
Re: hopefully im something by ~ska~	*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 65.95.30.115	9-Feb-05/4:59 PM
I loved it really........Look at my suicide poem and rank it please....10...
Re: She wishes by INTRANSIT	*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 65.95.30.115	9-Feb-05/5:07 PM
ok than
Re: water falls by Bill Z Bub	*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 65.95.30.115	9-Feb-05/5:07 PM
w/e
Re: Unemployment Lining by Jeremi B. Handrinos	*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 65.95.30.115	9-Feb-05/5:08 PM
okay
Re: untitled by highnightmaregurl	*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 65.95.30.115	9-Feb-05/5:09 PM
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
Re: Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8	*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 65.95.30.115	9-Feb-05/5:09 PM
uh huh
Re: Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya	*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 65.95.30.115	9-Feb-05/5:10 PM
nice
Re: Beating heart by celticskatermatt1	some deleted user 68.7.189.144	9-Feb-05/6:55 PM
hey this is really meaningfull
Re: Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000	sliver 172.128.22.184	9-Feb-05/10:11 PM
I would tend to agree, We are losing our sense of morality
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 172.128.22.184	9-Feb-05/10:14 PM
lies this need? Your poetry has improved quite a bit, I really liked this one.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 12.72.4.192	10-Feb-05/8:07 AM
Why did you post this twice under different titles?
Re: Goodbye by Dovina	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.1	10-Feb-05/11:02 AM
What! You can"t fight no more Like my father? Your friend the math teacher.