Re: Runaway by Cairsten	Shuushin 68.237.129.179	10-Jan-05/7:21 PM
surprised u haven't gotten more play on this.
Re: Untitled 18 by PopoyMola	Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2	11-Jan-05/3:48 AM
pare... pwede mo pang galingan ito.. nan 'dun yung emotions.. pangit lang talaga ang paglalantad mo.. 2
Re: The Poet's Plight by dougsoderstrom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.161.179.254	10-Jan-05/10:32 AM
First verse, loved/magical things were expected, and then second and third were like I got shit on while pondering the beautiful imagine lain before.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.11.30	10-Jan-05/11:28 PM
Haven't I suggested on one of your earlier poems that you have frighteningly little going on in your life? Please, go wander down some unlit backalley on the bad side of town. I'll lend you my prize miniskirt.
Re: The Poet's Plight by dougsoderstrom	zodiac 212.118.14.17	11-Jan-05/1:31 AM
The Negro's Plight: The Whemying Lying here nude in a puddle of cack, Besmear'd on my hindparts, and phlegmy, Hidden from sight (for I'm terribly black), I'm a Negro and I................. whemy. My behavior, I tell you, is nothing so sinful: Children do it - and even Steve Buscemi Is known to go in for an occassional chin-full Of the feeling we call......... "the whemy". Driven from within, while its virtues I extol And you heathens and non-PhDs condemn me - Oh God! It's happening! Quick! Grab the bowl! It's....................................... THE WHEMY!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.161.179.254	10-Jan-05/10:36 AM
We all tell ourselves that, but come on, the truth is written right in front of your face. Safety does not equal happy, much less love. *Smiles, realizes who he is and that if anyone has no right to go into love speals, just sighs* <3 Jason
Re: The Wall is Crying by daggatolar	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.161.179.254	10-Jan-05/10:44 AM
Harsh on the thought required to so much as understand what the fuck your talking about. No Offense. Thought it was bad ass as far as Imagines, but I draw no real meaning out of this. -8- for now.
regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.161.179.254	10-Jan-05/10:29 AM
Now thats, exactly how how it feels to be drowning in busy! <3 Jason
regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.161.179.254	10-Jan-05/10:41 AM
Good Idea, but... A) if your using Home as Heaven A1)Figure should be more *Insert You Diety here* A2)Go over the whole there may or may not have been footsteps left in the beach behind, and I may or may not have asked whose they where. In other words sound like those Damn Things outside of Rest Rooms.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	11-Jan-05/7:44 AM
Welcome back, though you never answered my question. Is this about Tolstoy's Crosacks? My Russian is rusty if ever lusty, and what is a Joan with a rack?
Re: Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom	cuddlytiger17 209.105.159.192	9-Jan-05/4:41 PM
The images don't seem to be connected very well, but I liked the ending.
Re: Existential questions by kawakurdi	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.161.215.158	9-Jan-05/4:10 PM
Forced rhyme helps drive it well. <3 Jason
Re: Draw Me A Pretty Picture by cuddlytiger17	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.161.215.158	9-Jan-05/4:20 PM
Damn, what I wouldn't give for a drunken down on his luck suicidal wino right now, a crayon, and some extra copies of this this to draw on the back of in case he has a couple of buddies :0 In other words, very moving <3 Jason
Re: Existential questions by kawakurdi	zodiac 212.118.14.17	10-Jan-05/4:32 AM
Incidentally, the best existential question ever is: When the Lord finally lets fly that last great trump he's been whemying for 2000 million years, will we remain in possession of our ears long enough to hear it and fall to the ground under the force of its too-many-parted harmonies, or will we instantly be turned into souls, to be blown this way and that by the terrible and everlasting gusts of wind that follow?
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.14.17	10-Jan-05/3:34 AM
You are so obviously white. -Failing Marks-
Re: Existential questions by kawakurdi	zodiac 212.118.14.17	10-Jan-05/4:13 AM
None of these lines are actually questions. I'd change the title. Or just insert questions marks more or less at random for a neat question-y effect. For example: Relativity is Absolute? Absolute is Relative? And Eternity is? beyond the livi?ng formative.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.11.30	10-Jan-05/11:40 PM
This one is not very different.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.11.30	10-Jan-05/11:42 PM
Using the word "ploethoera" is the quickest way to identify yourself as bum. That, and using poemranker.
Re: Poemranker I Couldn't stay Away by Tara57	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.42.213.225	10-Jan-05/6:27 PM
Wow, looks like you got hit by the harsher side of the ranker.
Re: spiritually driven by Crakyamuni	Crakyamuni 131.252.231.119	10-Jan-05/12:42 PM
can i get a vote ? Throw me a fuckin bone here.