regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.150.43	8-Jan-05/6:50 PM
stunning
regarding some deleted poem...	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.150.43	8-Jan-05/6:53 PM
This is sooooo... not a pimple
Re: War Story by dougsoderstrom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.150.43	8-Jan-05/6:55 PM
Have you ever heard of the difference between a letter and a poem?
Re: War Story by dougsoderstrom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.150.43	8-Jan-05/7:05 PM
"Moslem, becoming," just few typos, lots of forest gump rip offs, and a couple of rereads where spacing and metaphors, and spell check come into play
Re: Empty Expressions, Watching You by cuddlytiger17	Shuushin 64.222.173.32	8-Jan-05/7:22 PM
Great Job.
regarding some deleted poem...	PsydewaysTears 69.240.74.35	8-Jan-05/9:31 PM
Lol... the last one is the only stanza that doesn't have something S&M about it.
regarding some deleted poem...	nentwined 64.81.38.95	9-Jan-05/12:20 AM
Just beautiful.
regarding some deleted poem...	nentwined 64.81.38.95	9-Jan-05/12:22 AM
rough around 'and bewildered' I like how it starts off, and I like the twistmessage you have to give, but the middle-to-end don't wrap it properly for me.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	8-Jan-05/1:55 PM
Completely takes a nose dive at the end.
regarding some deleted poem...	cuddlytiger17 209.105.136.92	8-Jan-05/2:58 PM
This is really good, nice flow and topic.
Re: Existential questions by kawakurdi	cuddlytiger17 209.105.136.92	8-Jan-05/3:05 PM
Interesting, but some of your rhymes are really forced.
Re: The Fear of Being and will not be forever by Prince of Void	cuddlytiger17 209.105.136.92	8-Jan-05/3:11 PM
Some of these lines don't make sense at all...might want to edit some of your grammar and "fury" is with one "r"...
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	8-Jan-05/6:31 PM
The Lord isn't a shepherd any more. That was ages ago, before He acquired the Golden Fleece of Ram-Naba-Ka'zaa', and spontaneously transformed into a First Level Spirit Mage +2. And what become of his flock? Well after obtaining a 2:1 in combined media studies at Loughborough University, the Lord approached various broadcasting companies throughout the UK and obtained sponsorship to develop a fleet of robotronic hobo shepherds. These autonomous hobotrons now serve all the Lord's shepherding needs, giving Him more time to concentrate on His hobbies, which include football, swimming, and designing multimedia business presentations. That was in 1997. He spent the next five years trying to apply is combined media skills commercially. After several failed attempts to market his multimedia business presentation toolkits, He now lives alone in North Derbyshire, where He has set up a small business selling acorns. -10-
Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.150.43	8-Jan-05/6:42 PM
Now thats original. No mistaking that for some one else's qoute, what so ever. Seriously nice parity. <3 Jason
Re: Runaway by Cairsten	Shuushin 64.222.173.32	9-Jan-05/7:09 AM
Quite nice. A good sign is that I fairly quickly moved past the form of the poem (although the comma's are slightly... distracting - at least a learning curve) right to the content. I found this interesting, "I fumbled with childhood doors/As firmly shut against me as she is" yet in both cases (the door and the girl) you have the keys in your mouth. An enjoyable, mature piece.
regarding some deleted poem...	Crakyamuni 131.252.231.140	9-Jan-05/11:08 AM
charming read indeed.
regarding some deleted poem...	Crakyamuni 131.252.231.140	9-Jan-05/11:17 AM
I'm in color theory this term and this write makes me think of all the mystery of percieved color. I found it very subtle but loaded with truth.
regarding some deleted poem...	Crakyamuni 131.252.231.140	9-Jan-05/11:20 AM
Is this about authority or love, or both? revise and then we'll vote. "constantly"
Re: minute by flatliner	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	9-Jan-05/12:39 PM
i like this .... -mega
Re: The Giant Geometry of Time by somemorepoetry	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	9-Jan-05/12:41 PM
aweomse! this is totally aweseome! i love it! -megan