regarding some deleted poem...	PsydewaysTears 69.240.74.35	8-Jan-05/1:13 AM
Awww..... 'tis a rare bond indeed that can be labelled as though it were never going to break.
Re: Nightmares Of Yesterday by Zalev	PsydewaysTears 69.240.74.35	8-Jan-05/2:26 AM
The title's catchy. And I liked the intro and the final two stanzas... the rest of it though, kinda lost its flare somewhere admidst "mom said I was drunk" and "please stop my sin". Maybe I just wanted to be pulled more into your mind's reactions than just given a dictation of events.... and maybe some metaphorical images to bounce off of would've been nice too. And one of those tiny little umbrellas for my pina colada, if it's not too much trouble. •°•Gregory James•°•
Re: Dying In The Corner by Zalev	PsydewaysTears 69.240.74.35	8-Jan-05/2:43 AM
Too rightly this one hit home... pleasantly flowing and darkly satisfying. I like it a lot. •°•Gregory James•°•
Re: Tough Act To Follow by jroday	blacksoul 204.215.33.244	8-Jan-05/4:38 AM
Suppose a man mess around with your wife. Do you treat him justly? my father!
Re: Fanboy by Blindpoetry	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.63	7-Jan-05/8:34 PM
Nice :)
Re: Tough Act To Follow by jroday	jroday 204.215.33.244	8-Jan-05/5:03 AM
Did'nt know my son was log-in already, the second blacksoul comment is mine.
Re: The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya	horus8 24.130.62.63	8-Jan-05/12:33 PM
An ass-sandwich, holding the pickle.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	8-Jan-05/12:36 PM
Sheeple like you make me proud to wolf. Anything's better than mounting the son of god Out of sheer bad writing and boredom.
Re: Let God Unwrite Itself by daggatolar	zodiac 212.118.11.60	8-Jan-05/6:08 AM
Bow'ls, all of you. And you're all missing one very important detail. A cookie to whomever guesses right.
Re: War Story by dougsoderstrom	zodiac 212.118.11.60	8-Jan-05/6:17 AM
Do you know the Johnny Cash song "Ride On"? I think this poem strongly resembles it in that they both provoke the strongest disbelief (on my part) at the notion of either of you being closer to war than Texas. You fail. Drop and give me forty. -0-
Re: Tough Act To Follow by jroday	Dovina 69.175.6.101	8-Jan-05/8:30 AM
"Love" means many things in English. I wish we had all the Greek words with their different meanings for what we lump into "love." "Agape" comes close to your poem. Some folks are hard to love by any definition.
Re: AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.56	8-Jan-05/8:46 AM
Could I make a request?? Next time you rate a zero on a poem, kindly leave a small comment that describes what you hated about the poem, why it sucked and why did it deserve a zero. Every poet works hard on a poem and so they never think they deserve a zero...
Re: AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.56	8-Jan-05/8:52 AM
Anticipation**
Re: The Day The World Blew Away by OfaRevolutionAJD	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.56	8-Jan-05/8:54 AM
That is NOT a glosa
Re: The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya	Dovina 69.175.6.101	8-Jan-05/9:08 AM
I think you sacrifice too much for the rhymes - grammar, clarity, even interest.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	8-Jan-05/9:21 AM
Better grammar would help, even where you insert a word for rhythm's sake.
Re: You have 7 hours to live... now here's the bad news by D. $ Fontera	Dovina 69.175.6.101	8-Jan-05/9:25 AM
If it's about telemarketing, the title should give some hint. It seems like you're talking about several things at once.
Re: You have 7 hours to live... now here's the bad news by D. $ Fontera	Crakyamuni 131.252.229.84	8-Jan-05/10:40 AM
I think it's about Texas Hold Em. I love that game.
Re: AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul	Crakyamuni 131.252.229.84	8-Jan-05/10:43 AM
Trite.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 147.154.235.52	8-Jan-05/11:47 AM
very cute except for the last last bit. Fell apart at sowed...