Re: AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul	Dovina 69.175.6.101	25-Dec-04/10:56 AM
In putting a familiar saying with the name AL-NAAFIYSH, are you commenting on his life or his art? I don't know enough about him to say. I could comment on the saying, but you're getting at something here that I don't understand.
Re: Upon a Wooden Cross by wolfinaunicornsuit	Dovina 69.175.6.101	23-Dec-04/5:54 PM
You've lost me here. Except for a few glimmers, I'm looking into darkness. What's going on?
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 172.186.52.197	24-Dec-04/1:05 AM
He never found love after praying for it, believing in god raped him of belief in love (and god).
Re: blacksoul/disable/reply by jroday	jroday 204.215.34.245	24-Dec-04/4:43 AM
Sorry Dovina about deleteing your comment. I've got to get use to that red x damn. But it's me Felicia.
Re: blacksoul/disable/reply by jroday	blacksoul 204.215.33.137	23-Dec-04/3:28 PM
A child who is understood becomes someone who understands.I was taught that all my young life.
Re: Scapegoat by Dovina	blacksoul 204.215.33.137	23-Dec-04/3:36 PM
I like it Dovina. I'll be spending my Christmas at the hospital. You have a Merry Merry Christmas.
Re: I have Learned to Let Go by Joe-joe	Joe-joe 68.194.47.34	24-Dec-04/6:04 AM
After hours of pondering, I've opted for theory number 1. Yes, all poets are dim and all poetry is nonesense, some are just dimer and more nonsensical than others.
Re: I have Learned to Let Go by Joe-joe	Joe-joe 68.194.47.34	24-Dec-04/6:08 AM
Hey Zodie, lighten up...or are you still upset about that little wild goose chase I sent you on a while back... you can attack my writing all you'd like but the fact of the matter is that I could sell you ice in the North Pole if I so desired. I wish you and your family a wonderful Christmas and a Happy New Year!! Peace Joe
Re: Possibilities by Nicholas Jones	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.7	24-Dec-04/9:02 AM
Class in glass!!! 10!!!!
Re: Wigging out by Jeremi B. Handrinos	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.7	24-Dec-04/9:05 AM
A Sestina, wow!! That's real tough!! I did one today but damn, this is million times better!! Do check me out if you could!! 10!!
Re: Lies of Society’s Guise by PsydewaysTears	Dovina 69.175.6.101	24-Dec-04/12:15 PM
"Lies of Society’s Guise" is redundant. Why not "Lies of Society."
Re: Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya	Dovina 69.175.6.101	24-Dec-04/12:21 PM
And thus you wrote this. Try reading some of the ridiculous comments on Poemranker. They're inspiring! "I can't catch a single one on paper"
Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina	PsydewaysTears 69.240.74.35	25-Dec-04/1:19 PM
cute.
Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina	jroday 204.215.33.64	25-Dec-04/6:35 PM
As my son says to me sometimes that's down -10- Felicia
Re: Lies of Society’s Guise by PsydewaysTears	Yikes 64.12.116.67	25-Dec-04/10:51 PM
Well, Lies of Society's Guies has a better rhythmic quality (this is comming from a musician). A lot catchier still in my eyes. As a whole, if people would take the time to read this piece, I believe they'd be awed.
regarding some deleted poem...	fevriere 62.254.128.4	26-Dec-04/7:30 AM
Really like the repetition, definitely works. On a grammatical note, you'll need to put full stops at the end of stanzas ("skies." "its melodies."). And maybe "cobwebbed skies" would be better. I'm not sure if "cobweb skies" is really helpful to the poem, I mean, are the skies very claustrophobic to the poet? There's no sense of fear or trepidation or anything, it seems more sleepy and peaceful. Enjoyed reading it. :)
regarding some deleted poem...	fevriere 62.254.128.4	26-Dec-04/7:42 AM
I reduxed A Wanderlust To The New. If you'd like to reread, it's here: http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=114662
Re: A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere	Bhaskaryya 61.0.144.84	26-Dec-04/9:01 AM
Beautiful!!!
Re: Math Poem by Dovina	sir_heff 65.13.72.62	26-Dec-04/2:41 PM
Two and nothing more is the same as one and one. are you expecting a threesome? -10- 'caues math kicks ass
Re: Math Poem 2 by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 67.122.15.3	26-Dec-04/5:50 PM
cuter