Re: Jasmime by Lee Ho Chan	Dovina 69.175.6.101	28-Nov-04/10:37 AM
Very real-sounding Chinese English voice. Too many redundant lines. Funny.
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	7!3 219.93.174.101	28-Nov-04/1:11 PM
i'm not a big fan of long poems, but *your* poems are just too beautiful to miss.
Re: Searching by dougsoderstrom	7!3 219.93.174.101	28-Nov-04/1:23 PM
my opinion on your poem: curiousity killed the cat. that's why the black cat isn't there... you keep asking questions! ps; love this poem ; good one.
Re: Breeze by Nicholas Jones	7!3 219.93.174.101	28-Nov-04/1:28 PM
i like how each line means the same thing, and yet you make it sound so beautiful. it's a peace poem. a nice breeze :)
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 152.163.100.68	27-Nov-04/6:42 PM
10/10!!!!! I love this poem! It is great! You are soo much better at all this then me! No fair! :) Let's hear some more-soon!
regarding some deleted poem...	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	28-Nov-04/2:23 AM
very cute. quite whimsical and tranquil... very nice. i don't like the spacing...quite. but you've got my 8.
Re: entangling my sweetheart sinks by skaskowski	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	28-Nov-04/2:31 AM
morbidly unamusing. SEEK OUT A NOVEL THEME! Don't be squelched by the waters of cliche! I know it's a temptation to resort to EASY, readymade topics...but it's not good. Very nice imagery, though. You've got my six.
Re: Open my bum Oh Lord (Museheart parody) By Jesus Niggerstein by Bachus	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	28-Nov-04/2:33 AM
this is very disgusting. any idiot can amuse the ants of the world by being a diabolical freak. try something challenging.
Re: Jesus, I funneled enough beer to marry that? by Bachus	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	28-Nov-04/2:37 AM
that's a bit talented. it's still freaking disgusting. attempt something clean, please. it's much easier to write freak-of-nature poetry than it is ordinary poetry... it cuts half of the vocabulary out when you can't use perverted language.
Re: Chocolate Rabbit Ears & Gay Sex by Bachus	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	28-Nov-04/2:38 AM
my favorite of all of yours. not quite as diabolical as the others. and very full of imagery... nice. i actually like it. you've got my 9.
Re: Guinness by Dovina	blacksoul 204.215.33.170	28-Nov-04/4:11 AM
Sounds like a man i know who worked for thirty years and raised five children.
Re: i was by skaskowski	travelingsk8er 68.7.187.148	28-Nov-04/5:50 PM
WoW! its great
Re: my poetic thought by amanda3	travelingsk8er 68.7.187.148	28-Nov-04/5:52 PM
disconnected but flowing at the same time....nice
Re: wrenched away from what? by skaskowski	travelingsk8er 68.7.187.148	28-Nov-04/5:53 PM
scary yat fascinating it gripped me the whole way through...thats good
Re: Tryst by <~>	travelingsk8er 68.7.187.148	28-Nov-04/5:54 PM
last line???
regarding some deleted poem...	travelingsk8er 68.7.187.148	28-Nov-04/5:55 PM
the last one was the best but disgusting
Re: Wanksta by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	travelingsk8er 68.7.187.148	28-Nov-04/5:57 PM
really?? ....thats great
Re: youth in asia by suckmychucks	travelingsk8er 68.7.187.148	28-Nov-04/5:59 PM
uhhh.no
Re: Into My World by sliver	Bachus 24.130.62.63	28-Nov-04/7:53 PM
As opposed to into Uranus? I'm sorry but this is so ransacked with cliche, and trite nonsense that it's practically a zit cream commercial. For instance: "Rosebuds seem pale in your presence even when wet with my tears" Okay, what kind of fuck munch cries on a rose? Do you normally walk into a garden and find a rose to water with your contrived tears of woe? Your an ass. "Emotions swell when you're near yearning to be unfurled" I love your language here. Makes you sound like a black porn star named Harry Homellete.
Re: Or So They Say by avery	Dovina 69.175.6.101	5-Dec-04/10:41 AM
Make the punctuation consistant and the last two lines moire forceful. Otherwise good.