Re: Subdued by blindwriter	7!3 219.95.233.253	21-Nov-04/5:32 AM
first long poem i bothered reading on
Re: The Ebony Orchid of Theta by Shardik	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	20-Nov-04/7:21 PM
A few trite lines here and there, but overall a good read.
Re: The darkest woods ever by Shardik	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	20-Nov-04/7:23 PM
Here again, several useless inserts that, contrary to popular opinion, don't serve to hold a piece together, but depreciate it's value. I like the third stanza. Masterful.
regarding some deleted poem...	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/7:27 PM
lol
regarding some deleted poem...	New Life Drug 69.107.26.171	20-Nov-04/10:48 PM
mm...yes.
Re: Sosomizing My Way Into Heaven by Bachus	New Life Drug 69.107.26.171	20-Nov-04/11:00 PM
thats fucking nice.
Re: The ABC's Of Adultery by horus8	blacksoul 204.215.33.141	21-Nov-04/5:42 AM
Shit happen to me like that one time. I liked the woman but she thought the only way she could keep me was to keep me fucked up and that shit played out.
Re: perfection by amanda3	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	21-Nov-04/7:23 AM
You are a deeply confused, silly person.
Re: A Moment Alone by blacksoul	Dovina 69.175.6.101	21-Nov-04/12:31 PM
The last thing he said to me was: “Dovina! others may deprive you of your material wealth and cheat you in a thousand ways, but no man can deprive you of the control and use of your imagination. That's why I say nothing in the world is more dangerous than sincere Ignorance and conscientious stupidity. I am sure that I'm going to get some kind of smart comment from someone, but understand! What people think of me isn't any of my business. And I would like for you to remember that my friend.” I didn’t know how sick he was, and told him that I was going to think about “sincere ignorance” and “conscientious stupidity” because I believed they would have more to say in time. I am keeping that promise and hope those important words will soon ripen into something he would appreciate. I never met him except here on poemranker, but I believe he was a good man.
Re: This Time Imperfect by RGSsparky	RGSsparky 128.243.220.22	22-Nov-04/2:01 AM
Poemwanker here i come, give me my wings. Can you tell me where these lyrics are from, please someone know.
Re: Maiden, Maiden by blindwriter	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	21-Nov-04/10:09 PM
I understand, and I sympathize.
Re: Me, Myself, and I by TLRufener	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	22-Nov-04/4:35 PM
Jesus wept.
Re: This Time Imperfect by RGSsparky	Dovina 69.175.6.101	22-Nov-04/4:51 PM
Please do not post things you have not written. This sucks no matter who, and I don't care, wrote it.
Re: Me, Myself, and I by TLRufener	Dovina 69.175.6.101	22-Nov-04/5:13 PM
good lines: But I don't talk to Myself; Myself talks to Me. Overall, this is too wordy with too many grammar mistakes.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 66.248.81.99	23-Nov-04/6:44 PM
The beginning was rough, but I liked the ending.. alot of the middle seemed a bit like filler to me. I bless thee with the almighty -7-. Go in peace.
Re: Feminist? by RGSsparky	SupremeDreamer 66.248.81.99	23-Nov-04/7:13 PM
Goddamn... thats fucking classic. Ten.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	23-Nov-04/7:45 PM
Wow! I've been trying to get poenranker to come up all day without success. Yesterday was little better. Other sites work fine, so it's at Kaolin's end. This poem was on top of the Recent heap, and I was lucky enough to see a good one first. It sounds a bit like some of the letters Civil War soldiers wrote to their sweethearts when chances were they'd never meet again. But yours is more eloquently written.
Re: Guinness by Dovina	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	25-Nov-04/4:57 PM
what a gay poem
Re: To Find Peace by travelingsk8er	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	25-Nov-04/5:00 PM
mike this is really stupid but a .........1212121212 thats waht u get
Re: Guinness by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.217.93	25-Nov-04/5:37 PM
This sounds like an accurately kept transcript of the night. The last stanza could be the first and nothing would be lost.