Re: the way things are goin' by irishfolksuicide	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/12:23 AM
lol funny
Re: Gone Away by Christof	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/12:29 AM
liked it :)
Re: sewer rat by irishfolksuicide	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/12:21 AM
like the richness of ur poems..
Re: Fastened to my belt by irishfolksuicide	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/12:27 AM
need more writers like you.
regarding some deleted poem...	leonxic 80.205.204.85	20-Nov-04/5:54 AM
My eyes Came across your poem I wont read this anymore I can't read this anymore 4.
regarding some deleted poem...	leonxic 80.205.204.85	20-Nov-04/6:00 AM
Clustered cliches cause crainial concussions. Bah! My freakin head! 5.
regarding some deleted poem...	New Life Drug 69.107.26.171	19-Nov-04/8:51 PM
a large number of people should do less answering themselves..perhaps some people need to do it more.
Re: puff by Torok	7!3 219.93.174.101	19-Nov-04/8:53 PM
this poem, nice nice nice. i like fish, btw.
regarding some deleted poem...	New Life Drug 69.107.26.171	19-Nov-04/8:55 PM
very classic
Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000	7!3 219.93.174.101	19-Nov-04/9:12 PM
i think the point of the last line was to rhyme? dunno. even that,... lol funny
Re: No recalculations needed by Bachus	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/12:13 AM
interesting poem... hope your other poems are better! :)
Re: The Khat by Bachus	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/12:16 AM
didnt like it, sorry.
Re: "I post here cause I have a lot of readers" by Bachus	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/12:18 AM
it was not bad.
Re: firelight lost by irishfolksuicide	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/12:19 AM
mamamia... lol that was good!
Re: Maiden, Maiden by blindwriter	horus8 24.130.62.63	20-Nov-04/5:41 PM
Transvestites selling lube do not a maiden make.
Re: Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick	7!3 219.93.174.101	20-Nov-04/1:49 AM
i think you have too many dots... it interferes with the other dots, don't u think? lol
Re: Social Parody by skaskowski	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	20-Nov-04/3:17 AM
It's got a cleverly abstract quality. Like something I would write. Except not quite splendidly idiotic. I have a feeling it was written out of boredom and absolute mindlessness.
Re: the absent-minded walk on the proverbial mountainside of nothingness + my mother's old tampons by skaskowski	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	20-Nov-04/3:33 AM
i am disgraced by posting here. i'm sure you didn't mean this as intelligence at all. there is a classification of poetry that is so entirely abstract in its imagery that it is clever. However, that form of poeticism is carefully written. Yours is obviously a piece of mockery. But I like it.
Re: Remus by Blurred Crusade	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	20-Nov-04/3:35 AM
Quite an enchanting narrative. The scenery is beautiful. Your line-division, masterfully utilized. Nice work.
regarding some deleted poem...	blindwriter 219.47.92.71	20-Nov-04/3:36 AM
Makes little sense in the end... However, your thought pattern is clever. The rhyming scheme is cute, but the rhythm leaves a little to be desired.