| Re: PATIENCE by jroday |
blacksoul 204.215.33.46 |
19-Nov-04/6:01 AM |
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I remember when you started out with this. I hope this
does'nt take your life.
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| Re: The Supreme Mind by Bobjim |
electroman1979 64.12.116.67 |
18-Nov-04/7:22 PM |
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am i reading this right? you're stating God evolved?
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| Re: Mice by MacFrantic |
richa 81.178.235.176 |
19-Nov-04/8:35 AM |
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Congrats. Previously it was only the poem that was stupid. Following your defense of, it is now clear you are stupid.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
x0lovelylarnx0 205.188.116.135 |
19-Nov-04/1:12 PM |
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That is a really great poem! I give you a 10
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| Re: Dear George Bush by scitz |
x0lovelylarnx0 152.163.100.135 |
19-Nov-04/6:54 PM |
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Your from England. How dare you judge our president. President Bush is way better than John Kerry. John Kerry had Botox injections. To me that sounds a little dumb because he doesn't look any better.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/6:59 PM |
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| Re: My Mom at her best! by Bachus |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:06 PM |
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i read the editors note and after that skipped. good intro, tho lol
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| Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:24 PM |
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lol i think i like the comments more than the poem
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| Re: Sunshine by alexander |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:28 PM |
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nice poem! people should write, in my opinion, more simpler poems like this once in a while. simple and tasty! :)
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| Re: Murder Poem 1 by [mojo] |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:30 PM |
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lol i enjoyed this. nice one!
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| Re: The Big NO by alexander |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:31 PM |
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it was... O.K.. i like your other poem, "sunshine" better..
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| Re: Caducus (destined to fall) by Caducus |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:35 PM |
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:36 PM |
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| Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:37 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:39 PM |
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| Re: This is Bad by newagepoet2000 |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:41 PM |
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lol yea, it's bad.. but it made me laugh!
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| Re: Breakfast by flouredweevle |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/7:46 PM |
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maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished...
but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol
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| Re: scarecrow saviour by skaskowski |
celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148 |
19-Nov-04/8:40 PM |
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| Re: A song by fatmansinging |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/8:43 PM |
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that, my friend, is a fat man singing
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7!3 219.93.174.101 |
19-Nov-04/8:47 PM |
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not bad... but i think (just a guess) you'll do better without rhyming.
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