Re: The Sparky by RGSsparky	Bobjim 143.167.79.200	12-Nov-04/3:05 AM
I found this poem entertaining Considering who wrote it it's amazing I've never ever seen such rhyming Here's a 10 for your great poeming
Re: Jesus by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.192	12-Nov-04/8:05 AM
This poem is about Bush's Jesus not Tony Blair's or yours. Right?
Re: Ash by horus8	edpeterson 68.79.60.123	12-Nov-04/8:25 AM
hey. WHen is your ban from AP up? that place is starting to scare me... DP roberson has been banned too. Bulletin threads are being censored left and right.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 69.175.6.101	12-Nov-04/9:19 AM
I think you need a title.
Re: Only You by hatedestruction	Dovina 69.175.6.101	12-Nov-04/9:24 AM
You have tried to relate an emotion you have felt to your readers using what you think are logical bridges and similis, but they fail logically. Most readers of poetry appreciate both emotion and logic.
regarding some deleted poem...	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	12-Nov-04/11:43 AM
this poem is a dicgrace to the human race
Re: Standards by skaskowski	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	12-Nov-04/11:43 AM
sketchy man
regarding some deleted poem...	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	12-Nov-04/11:44 AM
that sucks
Re: The Curse by Dreamer	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	12-Nov-04/11:44 AM
what the heck man
Re: Four Wheels, Curves, and Curbs by thekrow	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	12-Nov-04/11:48 AM
it doesnt flow man
Re: There’s A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	12-Nov-04/11:49 AM
thanks for the advice
Re: Hanging by celticskatermatt1	Dovina 69.175.6.101	12-Nov-04/12:16 PM
Better than your last, but punctuation would help, not hinder the flow, as some think.
Re: Jesus by Dovina	horus8 24.130.62.63	12-Nov-04/12:23 PM
A humpbacked turd.
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.20.71	12-Nov-04/12:26 PM
Profoundly stupid. Delegation is a time management technique, but you seem to think it's somehow equivalent to or a product of procrastination, which is the failure to apply any time management techniques.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	12-Nov-04/12:29 PM
Your comedy is dull.
Re: Dan by dougsoderstrom	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	12-Nov-04/12:33 PM
pretty good if u say so myself but u could cut down on the cussing check out one of my poems-- HANGING or THERES A VIOCE DEEP INSIDE MY HEAD
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 195.92.198.75	12-Nov-04/12:35 PM
You are the piss soaked remnants of a piss soaked granny at Yasser's funeral.
Re: Into My World by sliver	celticskatermatt1 68.7.187.148	12-Nov-04/12:36 PM
very emotional
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	12-Nov-04/3:26 PM
Close...
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	12-Nov-04/3:33 PM
The term "like just" is the downfall of American culture in general. Unless you're saying "Like just shut the fuck up". Selling bad writing, such as this, with yammering glee; as you and your sister do daily, deserves a realitty tv show of its own, or at least an acid rain enima.