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some deleted user 172.191.225.77 |
11-Nov-04/6:52 AM |
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No ping this didn't register.
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| Re: Driven by sgrala |
some deleted user 172.191.225.77 |
11-Nov-04/6:53 AM |
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| Re: It Still Hurts by poetryman |
some deleted user 172.191.225.77 |
11-Nov-04/6:49 AM |
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Poetically not brilliant but it made me feel for you.
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some deleted user 172.191.225.77 |
11-Nov-04/6:50 AM |
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Some good images here line 2 is standout
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jroday 204.215.33.164 |
11-Nov-04/1:04 AM |
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ED this is a really good and touching poem. I was totally wrong about you. -9-
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| Re: Ebony shadow by Twiggy77 |
sliver 63.190.80.133 |
11-Nov-04/12:00 AM |
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O.K. NOW I see that yer a Brit, Haven't voted, or commented on anything. read read read. comment, visit, learn. Welcome.
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| Re: Remembrance by Caducus |
some deleted user 172.191.225.77 |
11-Nov-04/6:51 AM |
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Memorable and palpable well done.
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| Re: Stayed Too Long by poetryman |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
11-Nov-04/4:05 AM |
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Bob Shank:
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=51265
Your poemes are an epic tale of failure. Your beard is a sure indicator of your failed street poetry. You hat however is about as beatnik cool as you can get.
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| Re: Remembrance by Caducus |
poetryman 66.173.175.21 |
11-Nov-04/5:31 AM |
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absolutely divine, for every time we remember, they die again. As one who lost his brother in nam, I truly appreciate this...thank you
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| Re: Where Have We Gone by poetryman |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
11-Nov-04/5:32 AM |
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Well done for copyrighting your colossal pile of dross. You may wish to scroll down to the bottom of the page, peer through your preposterous beardage and see that all poems are the © of their respective authors. You're truly a simpering halfwit.
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| Re: Bowie Still Gives Me a Bonner by phauge |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
11-Nov-04/5:39 AM |
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What the hell is a bonner?? did you mean bonnet? or a Doner?
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| Re: Lies by RION12 |
some deleted user 172.191.225.77 |
11-Nov-04/6:54 AM |
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Not good. Very basic and lifeless as a corpse.
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| Re: It Still Hurts by poetryman |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
11-Nov-04/12:00 PM |
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For general readers, the last paragraph is not needed. The value of this poem is how it relates us to our own similar feelings.
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| Re: Remembrance by Caducus |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
11-Nov-04/12:08 PM |
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A fine Veteran's Day sentiment. "Passels" seems unnecessarily erudite. "walls of names which each had a face" -> Walls of names that once were faces.
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Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
11-Nov-04/12:15 PM |
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The third verse is a bit confusing. I thought you were going to say that with your neighbor, you'd do just about anything to help, contrary to how you act at work. I wish you had.
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Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
11-Nov-04/12:18 PM |
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The last line is perfect.
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| Re: Thereâs A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1 |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
11-Nov-04/12:19 PM |
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Little said for so many words.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
11-Nov-04/12:35 PM |
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Not bad, except the last line - don't get it.
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| Re: Jesus by Dovina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 208.131.173.64 |
11-Nov-04/8:13 PM |
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The only circumstances under which I would describe a poeme as "Reflections on/after something" are circumstances of extreme jest. Yet this is no jest. With your very soul exuding conviction, you have actually begun a poeme with the dumpling: Reflections After Reading The New Testament. I suggest you go away and reflect on what you've done.
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| Re: Jesus by Dovina |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
12-Nov-04/1:51 AM |
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The depraved rantings of a spaz.
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