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some deleted user 68.232.112.101 |
13-Nov-04/4:58 PM |
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The first 12 lines are just great
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
some deleted user 68.232.112.101 |
13-Nov-04/4:59 PM |
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| Re: Remembrance by Caducus |
some deleted user 68.232.112.101 |
13-Nov-04/5:01 PM |
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| Re: Four Wheels, Curves, and Curbs by thekrow |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
12-Nov-04/4:31 PM |
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A fat gack of mulched cod.
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| Re: Only You by hatedestruction |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
12-Nov-04/4:33 PM |
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Just when I thought shit had been explored in all its carefully packed splendor, I step in this.
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
12-Nov-04/4:36 PM |
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A well placed, hovering, fart.
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| Re: Thereâs A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1 |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
12-Nov-04/4:38 PM |
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See, this is a perfect example of why you should be paying attention to that giant black cock up your ass instead.
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| Re: Jesus by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
12-Nov-04/7:20 PM |
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Thereâs something in this poem for everyone. If Iâve left someone out, it was not from sluggardry, but ignorance. Christians are offended for obvious reasons; atheists for suggestion of a King; story lovers because it tells, never shows; poets because it omits the cherished poetic devices; humanists for stoicism; logicians for unsubstantiated claims, drunkards for seriousness; teetotalers for simplicity. Have I left anyone out? Oh, yes, me because itâs the way I see it. Appologies.
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| Re: Dan by dougsoderstrom |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
12-Nov-04/3:35 PM |
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Faggery of the highest possible level.
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| Re: Remembrance by dragonfly |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
12-Nov-04/11:48 PM |
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| Re: Meltdown by longships |
longships 195.93.32.12 |
13-Nov-04/11:08 PM |
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For someone who has posted no poems, you certainly enjoy using the word INSIPID. Is this one of only a few words in your vocabulary.
Anyway, the way the world is going, this outcome is a distinct possibility.
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| Re: Meltdown by longships |
Shardik 24.130.62.63 |
13-Nov-04/11:23 PM |
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I would make "sends" singular
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| Re: Knives by SwiftFox |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
13-Nov-04/11:01 AM |
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INSIPID I like the part where Princess pops in.
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electroman1979 205.188.116.67 |
13-Nov-04/11:03 AM |
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good poem, here's some advice... stay up all night and stare at the eastern sky, then you'll for sure see the sunrise.
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| Re: Prince of Midnight by TLRufener |
Shardik 24.130.62.63 |
13-Nov-04/11:26 PM |
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Okay, in a fist fight, who would win:
Your vulva condensed poetry,
or a pair of Anne rice's underwear?
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| Re: Dino's by RGSsparky |
RGSsparky 128.243.220.21 |
14-Nov-04/2:57 AM |
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A product of Engineering Maths coursework, and a Dino's flyer.
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Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
14-Nov-04/12:48 PM |
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The quarel might go back to the Battle of Kinsale, stale as Irish memories are sometimes, and a fine depiction of the problem, a kind of rebuttle to the idea that good fences make good neighbors.
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| Re: moving away by celticskatermatt1 |
Dovina 69.175.6.101 |
14-Nov-04/12:51 PM |
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What good is the last line, except to rhyme?
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| Re: Meltdown by longships |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
13-Nov-04/11:34 AM |
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INSIPID That didn't happen.
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| Re: Hanging by celticskatermatt1 |
leonxic 80.205.204.85 |
14-Nov-04/1:44 PM |
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