Re: Dino's by RGSsparky	jessicazee 205.188.116.135	14-Nov-04/7:29 PM
Wanted: Jingle writer for pizza place. Some experience preferred; will train. Must have no body hair. No freaks. 555-dino
Re: My Wish by Fire_is_cool	Dovina 66.13.145.210	15-Nov-04/3:09 PM
hogwash!
Re: Pillosophy by Bobjim	Dovina 66.13.145.210	15-Nov-04/3:10 PM
Philospphy is worse!
Re: Boston by Dovina	Plaidypus 68.0.213.95	15-Nov-04/3:32 PM
But the Red Sox won!
Re: Tonight at the Bar, a Short Story Poem by jessicazee	Bobjim 143.167.79.194	15-Nov-04/8:06 AM
Weird enough to merit a 5.
regarding some deleted poem...	electroman1979 205.188.116.67	15-Nov-04/4:18 PM
great poem, keep up the good work, i could tell it came from the heart, -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 66.13.145.210	15-Nov-04/3:03 PM
"You conquered my flaw of being shy." That's agreat line because it happened to me once, and that's what makes a line great, of course. Many people are out hunting for that person to collect the bounty.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 66.13.145.210	15-Nov-04/3:06 PM
This is pretty well said. I could poke holes in some of it, but it's still well said.
Re: Found Object #1 by Plaidypus	Dovina 66.13.145.210	15-Nov-04/3:08 PM
Silliness!
Re: moving away by celticskatermatt1	leonxic 80.205.204.85	14-Nov-04/1:49 PM
4 out of 5 quantum physisists agree; Colgate Whitening with Scope severely improves your chances of a sheep-related injury.
Re: moving away by celticskatermatt1	jessicazee 205.188.116.135	14-Nov-04/7:26 PM
who needs punctuation when the place has a face? Maybe some nu-punk song lyrics.
Re: WHAT YOU GIVE AWAY IS WHAT YOU TAKE TO HEAVEN by w~* ATHENA *~w	Bobjim 143.167.79.200	16-Nov-04/5:17 AM
Wahey!!! I haven't seen a poemwanker award since mine got taken away. Congratulations! Maybe I should get mine back to boost the numbers...
Re: Mobile Phones by RGSsparky	Bobjim 143.167.79.194	15-Nov-04/8:09 AM
I sense a lot of rage coming out in this poem. Perhaps you should consider some of my never-fail calming techniques. For you, I would suggest finding the biggest, cheapest, ugliest mobile phone around, buying 10 of them, and destroying them in interesting ways. Alternatively, send this poem to every mobile phone company's customer services e-mail address.
Re: Dino's by RGSsparky	Bobjim 143.167.79.194	15-Nov-04/8:11 AM
I feel this could have been taken further. Why not describe the clientele in intimate, if incorrect, detail.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bobjim 143.167.79.194	15-Nov-04/8:16 AM
Simply because I like the philosophy behind this, 7. But because I like the poem itself, you actually get a 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bobjim 143.167.79.194	15-Nov-04/8:18 AM
Maybe I'm reading this badly, but I get very little sense of depth. My God, what's happening, a completely serious thought on a poem from me!?! The end of the world is nigh!
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	w~* ATHENA *~w 205.188.116.135	15-Nov-04/10:08 PM
I WOULD REWORD THAT LAST SENTENCE AS YOU ASS KISSING GAY LOOKING WANNABE GANGSTAH FROM WEST HOLLYWOOD. BUT THAT IS JUST ME. BTW, I AM ENJOYING MARILYN MANSON SINGING DEPECHE MODE. ABOUT FUCKING TIME.
Re: WHAT YOU GIVE AWAY IS WHAT YOU TAKE TO HEAVEN by w~* ATHENA *~w	Dovina 66.13.145.210	16-Nov-04/7:48 AM
The title tells us too much. The all-caps speak too loudly, adding to the preachiness.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 66.13.145.210	16-Nov-04/7:51 AM
Some event escapes me, an off-t-war parting maybe. Soem good lines, but vague.
Re: Dictionary Lesson by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.14.17	16-Nov-04/8:05 AM
Oh God! Math poems! This will make the approximately the millionth time the following message has been posted on poemranker. ..... 1) The converse of "I love you" is not "You love me". Its converse is nothing, or at best "If something is you, then I love that thing," since converses are mainly useful for altering if/then expressions. 2) None of the three main transformations (converse, inverse, contrapositive) can transform "I love you" into "you love me".