Re: Dictionary Lesson by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	16-Nov-04/8:57 AM
BIG FAT WOW.
Re: Dictionary Lesson by Dovina	Bobjim 143.167.79.200	16-Nov-04/9:11 AM
Psh
regarding some deleted poem...	fevriere 62.254.128.6	16-Nov-04/9:43 AM
It truly does make one wonder. So much poemranker poetry about poo. Little about wee. There's something I haven't covered yet.
Re: For Ike by INTRANSIT	[mojo] 80.58.44.42	16-Nov-04/9:46 AM
Excellent. I was needing a little bit of rhyme and along it came... bang on time. V nice.
Re: Trapped in a horseshoe by INTRANSIT	fevriere 62.254.128.6	16-Nov-04/9:51 AM
I like the line breaks, they build tension, make the words seem like worth living too. Just thinking though, is "nighttime sun" just there to rhyme with "captive one"?, because I don't know if it belongs, otherwise.
Re: Dictionary Lesson by Dovina	richa 81.178.235.176	16-Nov-04/11:50 AM
The T-word irritates me, I find the idea of poets (or anyone) saying what truth is a bit pretentious. The F-word in the penultimate line, the same. As for 'converse' maybe use reciprocal or something like that.
Re: Feminist? by RGSsparky	RGSsparky 128.243.220.41	16-Nov-04/12:57 PM
I met the most annoying American feminist, hence the above...
Re: Last dance at the lake by Caducus	RGSsparky 128.243.220.41	16-Nov-04/1:17 PM
Lovely
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	RGSsparky 128.243.220.41	16-Nov-04/1:19 PM
your point?
Re: madness by mashasha	RGSsparky 128.243.220.41	16-Nov-04/1:48 PM
very odd, very difernt, very weird, but still, i always give a 10
Re: Feminist? by RGSsparky	edpeterson 68.79.22.23	16-Nov-04/2:02 PM
FUcking hilarious
Re: Feminist? by RGSsparky	fevriere 62.254.128.6	16-Nov-04/2:16 PM
Undelightful and horrible grammar.
Re: madness by mashasha	fevriere 62.254.128.6	16-Nov-04/2:17 PM
"u" is not a word.
Re: It Still Hurts by poetryman	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	17-Nov-04/5:28 AM
That last paragraph was needed as it helped me void my lunch over my desk - up to that poit I thought I might hold it in. Top Work Bobby!
Re: why you change?.. by shadowanime2	leonxic 204.218.244.11	17-Nov-04/1:14 AM
Incomprehensible. I hope this is a joke. I hate it.
Re: Feminist? by RGSsparky	Bobjim 143.167.79.145	17-Nov-04/3:27 AM
Love it. But really, it's too good. You'll never get your orange wings like this.
Re: GODDESS by jroday	blacksoul 204.215.33.158	17-Nov-04/7:05 AM
This is a lovely poem man
Re: The Supreme Mind by Bobjim	Bobjim 143.167.79.200	17-Nov-04/8:56 AM
Bobjim's making a comeback. Oh yeah.
Re: Mice by MacFrantic	richa 81.178.235.176	17-Nov-04/3:18 PM
Not sure this is a great insight into mice but it sounds ok. Apart from 'not but strife' which sounds ridiculous.
Re: Dictionary Lesson by Dovina	richa 81.178.235.176	17-Nov-04/3:23 PM
I don't know if you meant this, but it reads as though there is no object of your 'love' but rather you are just transforming the phrase I love you.