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Tintagiles 198.164.251.198 |
28-Oct-04/8:04 PM |
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Cut out the adjectives and see what it gives. Alternately, toss out the dictionary.
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| Re: Friends by mishy_lee |
Tintagiles 198.164.251.198 |
28-Oct-04/8:06 PM |
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Very clever how in every second stanza the rhyme isn't true.
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| Re: Ahkataka Akarnakuray by Imago |
Imago 64.8.77.198 |
28-Oct-04/8:08 PM |
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This one seems to get alot of hits but no comments. Strange?
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Caducus 172.202.106.31 |
28-Oct-04/4:50 AM |
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Focused poetry and its so good to see quality time results in quality with your work
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Caducus 172.202.106.31 |
28-Oct-04/4:52 AM |
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How shit is this 2 comments on a rare form of poetry.
Ed this is awesome the end in particular.
bet the next person to comment mentions a prawne or takes the piss.
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some deleted user 64.12.116.67 |
27-Oct-04/5:33 PM |
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I like flowers ;) Excellent poem. You obviously have more talent then me-- but that isn't new news! 10/10
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some deleted user 64.12.116.67 |
27-Oct-04/5:40 PM |
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Great poem Sliver...........just like the one before this one, and the one before that..and the one before that...ALL OF THEM are great So I think I'll shall give you ( though it is hard to decide)...Of course, 10/10 :) :) :) :)
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Dovina 17.255.240.138 |
27-Oct-04/5:51 PM |
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It's hard to know if you're making fun of this meeting-God-and-answering-to-him stuff or if you're literal. If you're really preaching, then get rid of the cliches and state your case in plain English. No vote until I know which.
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| Re: Turbulence by horus8 |
sliver 63.191.105.247 |
27-Oct-04/6:31 PM |
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Here you are again with anoyher f******n 0 on my poetry? I don't make five suedonimmmes of myself to give you hateful scores. WHY?>
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sliver 63.191.105.247 |
27-Oct-04/7:08 PM |
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wilco 4.227.32.54 |
27-Oct-04/7:40 PM |
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I'm just curious as to whether or not you ever put music to your lyrics. Not a bad one, btw.
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| Re: Who is deserving of all my love by zodiac |
wilco 4.227.32.54 |
27-Oct-04/7:49 PM |
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I'm glad to see you writing again. I wish you'd spend as much time writing as you do attempting to make Poemranker newbies feel bad about themselves. You're not half bad, is what I'm trying to say.
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edpeterson 68.79.20.59 |
28-Oct-04/5:56 AM |
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one step forward, two steps back? Now, where have i heard THAT before?
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| Re: Delicate Was by klosterfobik |
edpeterson 68.79.20.59 |
28-Oct-04/7:01 AM |
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i had intended to rank this poem on its merits, but then I read the comments. adverb indeed. -0-
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
some deleted user 163.1.146.88 |
28-Oct-04/11:08 AM |
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This "darkangel" is a literary genius. Leave him alone. He's clearly a bummer with no friends. Apart from his poetry. Which is incredible and should be published.
I assume you draw on some of the poetic greats of years gone by. If Byron were alive today, I truly believe that he would be tackling these very issues.
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horus8 24.130.62.63 |
28-Oct-04/11:59 AM |
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Ha ha, you got banned.
Naturally, I said it was all YOUR fault.
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| Re: An Even Better God by wilco |
Dovina 24.52.156.155 |
28-Oct-04/12:22 PM |
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What makes you think you can slither away without a word, and come waltzing back a month later without so much as a flimsy explanation. I'm melted by "special thanks" though and can only say, Welcome Back.
This is a very funny take-off on "A Better God" and also quite profound if you want to open discussions on whether such a god exists, and if so, whether he sends hurricanes, earhtquakes and plagues in anger. Your last two lines pretty well sum up where such discussions end.
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| Re: Ending by Dovina |
Dan garcia-Black 63.206.233.61 |
28-Oct-04/5:19 PM |
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What are the chances tha yours and Horus8's houses both burned down and are posted as poems on the same day? Wonder...
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| Re: Ash by horus8 |
Dovina 24.52.156.155 |
28-Oct-04/6:45 PM |
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A house is a house is a house,
An ended thing an' black.
But why not "and" and "B"?
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Tintagiles 198.164.251.198 |
28-Oct-04/8:03 PM |
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But your possibilities will be so much wider if you're NOT following God's rules. Just think: for starters, you'll be allowed to vary the positions.
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