Re: Lost Soul by ChefKSP	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.99	8-Sep-04/3:33 PM
I don't know. I couldn't get myself to finish the whole thing.
Re: Forever Lasting by ChefKSP	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.1	8-Sep-04/3:54 PM
I Will Always Feel Complete While Your In My Life. Yep.
Re: Friend Ship by ChefKSP	klosterfobik 64.12.116.140	8-Sep-04/4:22 PM
Are you for real?
Re: Lost Soul by ChefKSP	klosterfobik 64.12.116.140	8-Sep-04/4:26 PM
No offence - but please try a different form of expression.Poetry is just not your cup of tea.
Re: Love by ChefKSP	klosterfobik 64.12.116.140	8-Sep-04/4:32 PM
You'll never be talented, You'll always ramble, You'll want to become more than just a moron, You'll feel better when you quit posting this crap.
Re: Forever Lasting by ChefKSP	klosterfobik 64.12.116.140	8-Sep-04/4:37 PM
I found the hidden message!Is it you markedly suck? Stick to cooking Chef KSP!
Re: Dare by LintyWeenis	klosterfobik 64.12.116.140	8-Sep-04/4:42 PM
Why is she/he screaming your name? Is it the danger or the size of your penis?
Re: A Poem by BigB	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	9-Sep-04/5:10 AM
Cunny-sexer.
regarding some deleted poem...	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	9-Sep-04/5:12 AM
Quendo
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 195.157.153.253	9-Sep-04/5:13 AM
I sincerely hope that this is another anonymous comment
Re: Dare by LintyWeenis	LintyWeenis 205.188.117.13	8-Sep-04/6:09 PM
It's open to interpretation. And who says it's a she?
Re: Edges by Blue Magpie	wilco 4.226.81.243	8-Sep-04/6:33 PM
Very pretty. Grows a bit stale in a couple of spots and there are some forced rhymes, but overall I like it. Been a while since I've seen you on here. Welcome back.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 4.226.81.243	8-Sep-04/6:34 PM
Wonder why she doesn't like blind dates...
Re: Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry	wilco 4.227.32.63	8-Sep-04/6:49 PM
The bottom line is that smoking is cool and you know it. If you damn nonsmokers would take the time to learn how to smoke, you'd realize how good it really is. In all seriousness, though, it's not a bad poem but you really need to spell check it.
regarding some deleted poem...	electroman1979 198.81.26.71	9-Sep-04/1:05 AM
great poem,keep up the good work :D
Re: The Fog And The Androids by Shardik	klosterfobik 152.163.100.195	9-Sep-04/5:02 PM
too long - too boring?
Re: Im Scared by crystal4	crystal4 4.14.129.6	9-Sep-04/5:03 PM
this poem is true
Re: Im Scared by crystal4	Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.81.101	9-Sep-04/5:48 PM
RUN & HIDE
Re: Lost Soul by ChefKSP	Sasha 69.138.240.116	9-Sep-04/6:22 PM
Jesus. You are sooooooooo good. It just amazes me. The beginning of nearly every line with "I" provides a sense of continuity that more than makes up for the disjointed yet comfortingly predictable lines. It is hard to believe that this is the work of an adolescent struggling to keep it together. A well deserved 10 HAHAHAHAHA Fooled ya, didn't I. No. Sorry. I was kidding. This poem sucks. I know it's hard to bear someone telling you that but it does. It reminds me of the soppy crap of my English teacher way way way back in my freshman year of highschool: Self-righteous, cliché, and about as articulate as George Bush while talking to the cop who pulled him over for drunk driving. A well deserved 0.
Re: Love by ChefKSP	Sasha 69.138.240.116	9-Sep-04/6:25 PM
Aww. How distinctively pathetic. Your Revealed feelings only prolongs the time till your heart is broken once again?? What the fuck is that? I believe you meant "prolong" and not "prolongs." Actually, you might want to take that whole line out. Or maybe you want to take the whole stanza; it adds nothing to the poem. Actually, just take out the entire poem. It adds nothing to this site.