regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 17.255.240.138	8-Sep-04/10:44 AM
To "release and be" is the best part of love.
Re: Sunrise by TLRufener	Blue Magpie 62.103.229.231	8-Sep-04/5:52 AM
The line "Once more I sleep none" is so ungrammatic it pretty much ruins the rest of the poem, some punctuation would also help.
Re: New Year by emilyowey	Blue Magpie 62.103.229.231	8-Sep-04/5:57 AM
Perhaps a touch self-pitying and a little open to personal interpretation, vagueness and subtlety are not the same thing.
Re: New Year by emilyowey	Blue Magpie 62.103.229.231	8-Sep-04/5:57 AM
Perhaps a touch self-pitying and a little open to personal interpretation, vagueness and subtlety are not the same thing.
Re: New Year by emilyowey	Blue Magpie 62.103.229.231	8-Sep-04/5:57 AM
Perhaps a touch self-pitying and a little open to personal interpretation, vagueness and subtlety are not the same thing.
Re: Love Lie's In Misery by Brandy_n_Cali	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.154.163.133	8-Sep-04/7:08 AM
A notch below staggeringly cack.
Re: Delicate Was by klosterfobik	zodiac 213.186.171.49	8-Sep-04/1:18 AM
I'm confused about how you intended for the phrase "of delicate was" to be grammatical and relevant, instead of just being a cutesy Ben Harper-ish affectation. Would you mind explaining it to me? Thanks, The Islam Society for Grammar Detention
Re: A Poem by BigB	BigB 202.156.2.50	8-Sep-04/7:45 AM
NO! that ain't right
Re: A Poem by BigB	BigB 202.156.2.50	8-Sep-04/8:26 AM
http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/asia-pacific/country_profiles/1143240.stm that source is unreliable!!! the prostitute thing is totally WRONG
Re: Curtains by mr smith	Dovina 17.255.240.138	8-Sep-04/10:42 AM
Old age, minds fail, memories and desires last. Not bad.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.130.62.63	8-Sep-04/12:07 PM
Maybe... You do realize that this is the same poem you've been writing to your Dad, Jesus, your boyfriend, and the rapists for some time now.
Re: Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry	Bachus 24.130.62.63	8-Sep-04/12:09 PM
A roaring flea.
regarding some deleted poem...	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.99	8-Sep-04/2:00 PM
You asked for me to comment on something so here we go. I was always a fan of the "I can't have this person" type stuff, call me a sucker for it. Nice. Sweet. To the Point. Not that I'm anyone special to be giving critique on other's work. I like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.99	8-Sep-04/2:10 PM
Waiting is always the hardest part. Insecurity. Not having closure, good or bad. Excellent expression of this. Good job :D
Re: The Frontman of a Band Called Joe by MacFrantic	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.99	8-Sep-04/2:19 PM
I won't vote on this because poems that I like I tend to hand out 8's to. But whether or not the world's 8 is the same is mine, well I don't know. But I will say that I like this. Reminds me of the stuff you'd find in Cobain's journal.
Re: I Don't Care by ForgottenSoul17	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.99	8-Sep-04/2:21 PM
Hmm. We've all felt like that at one point or another.
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.99	8-Sep-04/2:31 PM
Ah, I couldn't help it. It actually made me smirk a little.
Re: Worlds Worst Poem by Brittanyy	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.99	8-Sep-04/2:35 PM
Um. Well the words "letting go issues" comes to mind, but who am I to judge. It's a 5 for me, Bob.
Re: Mourning Sickness by Pervy Elf	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.99	8-Sep-04/2:48 PM
Yea.
Re: Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry	LintyWeenis 152.163.253.99	8-Sep-04/2:52 PM
This poem is one of the longer ones I've read. But, as long as it was for me, I kept reading. That's good. Typos I could have done without, but otherwise, lovely.