Re: Let your heart roam free by Leah11	Leah11 144.138.106.61	2-Sep-04/8:42 AM
hope this is a prose poem as I'm green my friends so don't laugh at me if I'm completely wrong. xxx
Re: Love Letter by wilco	Dovina 24.52.157.176	2-Sep-04/12:04 PM
She's young and don’t know nothing ‘bout life. A good He-done-her-wrong-song. But is crying bold? It seems more an escape from bold. The last verse - a nice switch.
Re: Swimming in Space & Fishing for the Luridness Monster by SupremeDreamer	klosterfobik 205.188.116.140	2-Sep-04/6:36 PM
Quite lame.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 4.227.44.57	2-Sep-04/7:48 PM
You've always got a positive message. ;0)
Re: One Perfect Moment by Leah11	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.113	2-Sep-04/8:35 AM
Works for me at this perfect moment.-10-
Re: that conceited little bastard by BigB	Leah11 144.138.106.61	2-Sep-04/8:54 AM
very powerful, angry and straight to the point....
Re: Hoodwinked by Dovina	wilco 4.226.153.113	2-Sep-04/4:55 PM
hogwash? really? For some reason, I tink that word takes away from it...but thats just me. The rest is good though.
Re: Let your heart roam free by Leah11	klosterfobik 205.188.116.140	2-Sep-04/7:33 PM
Like the feel and honesty - structure could be better. -8.5-
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 4.227.44.57	2-Sep-04/7:50 PM
Sad when this sort of thing happens.
Re: How many? by rnsbreeze	wilco 4.227.44.57	2-Sep-04/7:58 PM
...roads must a man walk down, before you can call him a man? ...licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop?
regarding some deleted poem...	FadedHappiness 216.76.239.41	2-Sep-04/7:58 PM
*9*
Re: happy birthday by rnsbreeze	wilco 4.227.44.57	2-Sep-04/7:59 PM
a little too...I don't know...Hallmarky for me..
Re: Down With Ingenuity by Dovina	wilco 4.227.44.57	2-Sep-04/8:02 PM
So true.
Re: Heart by Shardik	wilco 4.227.44.57	2-Sep-04/8:05 PM
very old-school.
regarding some deleted poem...	capachijim 64.12.116.140	2-Sep-04/8:55 PM
noice
Re: crash&burn by AM I EVIL?	AM I EVIL? 64.114.105.13	2-Sep-04/9:44 PM
i really like this peice... it puts me in a certain state of mind
Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac	horus8 24.130.62.63	2-Sep-04/10:40 PM
A finely crafted foam...
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	2-Sep-04/11:10 PM
Wild
Re: ~Frosty~ by Brandy_n_Cali	Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.108.224	2-Sep-04/11:48 PM
why are there hardly ne coments or votes 2 night on the poems
Re: crash&burn by AM I EVIL?	Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.108.224	2-Sep-04/11:51 PM
I LIKE THIS POEM! THAT MAY SOUND A LITTLE MORBID SINCE THAT THE POEM IS ABOUT DEATH. BUT I DO, I REALLY LIKE IT!