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Skamper on inside the raven by PsydewaysTears 14 Oct 2007, 7:53 PM
nice work - lurking evil in a gently lulling tune... always the trap. :)
x0lovelylarnx0 on Bitter by Ranger 9 Oct 2007, 3:34 PM
I love the way you repeat the lines but add something different afterwards! ALso, This poem makes the reader feel the narator's emotions. Love the Poem!
x0lovelylarnx0 on My first wish and last by Bachus 9 Oct 2007, 6:06 PM
Well Put together! Love it!
x0lovelylarnx0 on You are a divider by Bachus 9 Oct 2007, 6:07 PM
WOW!!! Imagery is effective!
x0lovelylarnx0 on Children in the Storm by thepinkbunnyofdoom 9 Oct 2007, 6:12 PM
The feeling of the poem is expressed well! Good Job!
x0lovelylarnx0 on Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar 9 Oct 2007, 6:15 PM
Interesting! But a little confusing! But all-in-all it's pretty good!
PoeticXTC on This Is Me by PoeticXTC 9 Oct 2007, 11:37 PM
my main point in this poem isn't just my physical appearance., nor is it an ego issue.. It's what people perceive of me. I am physically all these things but that's only what is seen. When in reality there is more to me then just a pretty face and nice body... maybe if you all weren't so narrow-minded you would have caught that in the last couple of lines. My peotic style will not be yours; neither will my personality be governed by your opinions of me.
alvinb on union with the eternal love by Prince of Void 10 Oct 2007, 3:19 AM
just voting
x0lovelylarnx0 on some deleted poem 10 Oct 2007, 11:32 AM
I do not even know what to say about this one!
Skamper on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0 13 Oct 2007, 9:28 PM
this is very bland - you need to drop such overused phrases and take what is in your head and write it in your own words...don't worry about what other people rate your work, it's not that important...honestly you seem to want to play to the masses instead of just playing.
Skamper on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2007, 9:31 PM
yes-yes...neatly done, opens up the mind and closes the mouth
Skamper on The Devil and I by forsaken 13 Oct 2007, 9:34 PM
disjointed and lacking any kind of rhythm I could find (maybe just my two left brains)
Skamper on some deleted poem 13 Oct 2007, 9:42 PM
like is used too many times for such a short piece. the first and last versus could do without it. life sliding compared to tyre dust is creative...dust always seems to conjure images of swirling, and alike. Your sliding dust across the truck stop is spot on.
Skamper on back o' the fridge by nypoet22 13 Oct 2007, 9:43 PM
as natural as a dancer...loved it
Skamper on Solstice, 2007 by lectricprincess 13 Oct 2007, 9:47 PM
a pure pleasure to read -
Skamper on RAGTIME by xyz 14 Oct 2007, 7:57 PM
why don't you just throw stones at her - pull her hair and maybe snap her bra-strap. then she'll know you really like her
SupremeDreamer on Wait To Answer by forsaken 15 Oct 2007, 9:23 AM
Your not serious are you? If this were a "romantic pimple" I'd give this a ten, but it's been labeled as free verse, so here is a zero. By the way, it's seriously gay to vote for yourself.
secretlyvulnerable on SEX (II) by blkarak 15 Oct 2007, 11:51 PM
I'm jealous of you... for once I experienced this with the love of my life... but now he's gone and I fear he will never come back. I miss it...
secretlyvulnerable on Losing you by forsaken 16 Oct 2007, 12:00 AM
The last two lines really get me...
secretlyvulnerable on Be The One by forsaken 16 Oct 2007, 12:04 AM
I hope you share this with teh woman it's all about.. I dont see how she could not want to be with you...