Re: Crazy with a Capital K by D. $ Fontera	Prince of Void 217.66.199.251	25-Jul-04/11:51 PM
that was good ..i like it
Re: Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT	Shuushin 147.154.235.51	26-Jul-04/7:54 AM
how sad. how very sad... :)
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	Venus 67.165.242.105	26-Jul-04/12:58 AM
Glad I found this one - a big, fat 10.
Re: Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina	Shuushin 147.154.235.51	26-Jul-04/6:10 AM
interesting location and motivation - no judgement implied; the poem stands out because of it.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.2.83	26-Jul-04/7:51 AM
Have you been listening to Bebel Gilberto's new CD?
Re: Gap-Fold vs. Sour Milk by Venus	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	27-Jul-04/3:28 AM
kill the refrain at least, I think - and "just", ghost line is very nice.
Re: Returning what I’ve despaired before by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 217.218.131.140	25-Jul-04/1:16 PM
The Despair haunted the eternity I can’t walk away…I still rule the chaos as prince of void
Re: Dirty Heaven by SupremeDreamer	Dovina 17.255.240.206	25-Jul-04/1:39 PM
Good rant, if a bit long. May Breaonna make it to Pasadena and JJ's where she can get dinner and drink for three bucks.
Re: Something's gone wrong by zodiac	daniella 24.232.6.111	25-Jul-04/3:10 PM
are you asthmatic too?
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165	25-Jul-04/7:01 PM
Excellent.
Re: Fear by Mona Lisa	Shardik 24.130.62.63	25-Jul-04/8:58 PM
"I'm so fucking tired seeking Galilee, Just want to help the sparrow" Me too I want to save all the fucking sparrows. then I want to funnel them at 4500 psi through some 1 inch pvc pipe at your moose knuckle you mop wristed satalite hussy.
Re: Returning what I’ve despaired before by Prince of Void	Shardik 24.130.62.63	25-Jul-04/9:13 PM
"To High beak sky" Sir, you are no beaker.
Re: Returning what I’ve despaired before by Prince of Void	Shardik 24.130.62.63	25-Jul-04/9:15 PM
I was once fell into the void, but lucky for me, I was just hallucinating, and it turned out to be my my face in my omellete and a clean nickle of spank.
Re: Flying things by INTRANSIT	SupremeDreamer 204.31.168.232	25-Jul-04/7:56 AM
Good stuff, and I can relate to some of whats said, old friend. Blessed with nine, good luck and sharper pen points.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 66.13.145.210	25-Jul-04/7:56 AM
Everything is not the same, and that's what makes it work in two ways. It may be that not much has changed or it may be that a lot has changed. I can read both and like to ponder both.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.54	25-Jul-04/9:50 AM
Two poems for the price of one. Broken drum special (can't be beat).
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.54	25-Jul-04/9:59 AM
Is it a poem about what is vague or what's in vogue?
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.166.216	25-Jul-04/11:25 AM
Idealistic Nostalgia. It made me cringe and spit and burn and made my stomach churn churn, my mind found only evil and thats was also all my crippled eyes could discern... zero.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.166.216	25-Jul-04/11:32 AM
What white powdered rocks are you referring to? Crack? What made you feel that there was something so amazing or the emotion was in the right place to justify the horrible cliched feel of the whole thing and the vague bland skeleton of your piece? (devoid of marrow, tsk, not even the vultures could squander some nutrient from this poems bleached remains hurled out across the rocks and sands of your shallow chasm.) Zero.
Re: Dirty Heaven by SupremeDreamer	TAMARAG67 205.188.116.70	25-Jul-04/12:47 PM
this reminds me of long-ago college weekends were I would wake up with a hangover to indulge myself in a breakfast of a cold bagel and an amaretto sour----thanks for the memories.