Re: Toes by BadPoet	some deleted user 65.100.247.29	24-Jul-04/1:29 AM
wow. it was a lot more entertaining than i could have expected, and though i've got a foot phobia, i enjoyed it. as a poem it's well rounded, though the fetish frightens me personally.
regarding some deleted poem...	TAMARAG67 205.188.116.141	24-Jul-04/4:48 AM
i enjoyed the flow of this-it made me feel you had some actual life experience instead of someone pretending they do. those are feelings i have related to at a time in my own past. good show!
Re: The masquerade by vamos_tuzos	some deleted user 65.100.247.29	24-Jul-04/1:20 AM
short and to the point. it perfectly describes the general mood of the event, though still vague in a "you'd have to know to know" kind of way.
Re: Taste Your Cocky Ego by TheVoiceless	some deleted user 65.100.247.29	24-Jul-04/1:24 AM
abrupt ending, but point made.
Re: "My Love" by wickedemon4	sk8rs_rule_all 24.160.153.131	24-Jul-04/12:23 PM
The thong part did it for me, i dont like it.
Re: Hidden by QuirkyWonder	Dovina 66.13.145.210	24-Jul-04/2:28 PM
I there are also other explanations, but I'll accept yours.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165	24-Jul-04/2:57 PM
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggg!
Re: Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165	24-Jul-04/3:05 PM
They did "it"? I think I get this but, I think it can be done better. Lines one and two are kind of telling, and for my own edification, why grandmums?
Re: Blobby Food** by MR Blobby	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165	24-Jul-04/3:10 PM
I have to give you a compliment. Consistency.
Re: An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165	24-Jul-04/3:22 PM
Still, spot on.
regarding some deleted poem...	?-Dave_Mysterious-? 80.42.73.121	24-Jul-04/3:45 PM
The most poignant title ever contrived by a fourteen year old.
Re: Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT	?-Dave_Mysterious-? 80.42.73.121	24-Jul-04/3:49 PM
Brill!
Re: Hidden by QuirkyWonder	?-Dave_Mysterious-? 80.42.73.121	24-Jul-04/4:11 PM
Wow, a built in brush-off excuse: "Don't tell me you dislike what you read It simply means that you do not understand The beauty of this free verse Is hidden between the words" A new poemranker low!!!
Re: Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT	Dovina 17.255.240.206	24-Jul-04/4:14 PM
Technically terapin burgers. Funny.
regarding some deleted poem...	Sasha 69.138.238.225	24-Jul-04/4:25 PM
Your meter is nonexistant, the subject is cliché, and you are too young to be even trying.
Re: A Mothers Heart by TAMARAG67	Dovina 24.52.157.176	23-Jul-04/6:52 PM
Good thought, but too cliche. Could use some banter between baby and adult.
Re: Mask by sk8boardandpoems	some deleted user 65.100.247.29	23-Jul-04/8:34 PM
the rhyming definitely distracts the reader from whatever this poem is trying to convey. it's free verse, so free it up and let the words out.
Re: Strangers by Mandrake	Chasz Misleading 68.225.250.222	24-Jul-04/1:06 AM
I like
Re: Dan by dougsoderstrom	Chasz Misleading 68.225.250.222	24-Jul-04/1:08 AM
I like as well
Re: We are not in bed by einekleine	some deleted user 65.100.247.29	24-Jul-04/1:17 AM
it made me stop and say "hmm..." the rhyming was done quite nicely as well, and didn't detract from the poem itself.