Re: Slobby Blobby by MR Blobby	Semper Phildelis 68.98.149.33	11-Jul-04/6:08 PM
meh.
Re: A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha	horus8 24.130.62.63	11-Jul-04/11:54 AM
Want a twinkie?
Re: Searching by dougsoderstrom	Dovina 24.52.157.176	11-Jul-04/11:40 AM
True, but why do you search for an answer unsought?
Re: Searching by dougsoderstrom	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	11-Jul-04/7:02 PM
This question of faith is unsolvable by definition - save yourself the trouble and just wait and see. When your heart stops sending blood to your human brain, you will know all you need to know.
Re: Searching by dougsoderstrom	patty t 24.156.158.81	11-Jul-04/7:30 PM
the opposite of wisdom is also wisdom the rubbish tin glimmers if the lighting is right the underground rails will take us from the night
Re: Searching by dougsoderstrom	patty t 24.156.158.81	11-Jul-04/7:33 PM
ps I'd like it better without the "!"
regarding some deleted poem...	?-Dave_Mysterious-? 80.42.102.165	11-Jul-04/1:48 PM
What's the point of all the indentation? If you read this poem out, how would it sound different from a poem that was left aligned, but otherwise identical? Also, what do the full stops at the top and ottom add?
Re: Searching by dougsoderstrom	Prince of Void 217.218.131.140	11-Jul-04/2:45 PM
That was good...but do u have the sense of humor ? i think u have and the concept
Re: Funny Little World by LintyWeenis	LintyWeenis 205.188.117.13	11-Jul-04/6:57 AM
I was in a writing slump when I wrote this. I think I wrote it just cause I was insanely bored. But yea, all comments are probably true. :) -Linty of Weenis's
Re: Brando's Dead (slight reprise) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 217.42.186.254	11-Jul-04/3:53 PM
A gameshow host presents you with a choice of 3 doors: A, B and C. Behind one of the doors is a prize. Behind the other two doors is nothing. You pick door C, but don't open it. The host, who is standing behind the doors and can therefore see what they contain, then says he will reveal an empty door from the two you did not choose. He opens door B and you see that it is empty. You are now offered the choice of sticking with door C, or switching to door A. Should you: (i) Switch? (ii) Stick? (iii)Or doesn't it matter? [5 marks]
Re: Old Friends by sliver	Brittanyy 205.188.116.141	11-Jul-04/8:24 AM
I really like this poem..Nuff said.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	11-Jul-04/8:29 AM
Verse 2 is great, and says it all. The rest could use some shrinking.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	11-Jul-04/8:32 AM
I like a Christian statement that is free from Christian jargon, and this mostly is.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	11-Jul-04/8:35 AM
Last 5 lines are great. I don't get the heaven/gasoline line.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	11-Jul-04/8:49 AM
Now you've done it! Entered the controversial realm of stirring up conflict. I see what you're saying, like the way you say it, and think it's crap. And now I do predict you'll get your comments. I hope the votes will, like mine, be based on how the poem is written, rather than on my opinion of what it says.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 217.23.37.85	11-Jul-04/9:14 AM
re: "Where are the descendents of David and Solomon now?" They're all here. We're eating sheep kebabs as I type this.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 217.23.37.85	11-Jul-04/9:14 AM
And this poem is utterly without art.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.185	11-Jul-04/10:28 AM
This is an artless piece of serio-comic-athiestic-comunistic-republican-anti-bush-pro-christian-pro-pagation(children reference) pro-paganda. The end of the poem should be "How changed would be the world if the mythical Jesus had actually lived?" BTW was his last name really Keeeeeeeeerist and does it translate from the original Geek into Gates?
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.185	11-Jul-04/10:32 AM
Correction: Heaven still smells like scotch.
Re: A Girl’s Climax by Dovina	Nateislate 67.42.34.70	11-Jul-04/11:16 AM
I'm not sure why, but I can't help from being critical of this poem. First, the word "all" in line 1 is troubling. Is this meant to imply that, after he noticed, there will be no more dieting, etc.? In this sense, the poem is about a woman who lets herself go after she couples up. In the last line, the word "finally" raises questions. What did he notice, that she exists? Or that she's been dieting, etc.? If it's the latter, what was noticed? That she looks good or that she's too skinny and wears too much makeup? Ambiguity is good in moderation, but this poem seems too ambiguous to possess meaning. If this poem is autobiographical, congratulations on getting noticed. I'm sure you look fabulous.