Re: Forbidden by Chasz Misleading	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/3:24 PM
Good, especially verse 2.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.130.62.63	5-Jul-04/9:08 PM
I am Scornholio, I need Chippees for my Bingo, are you Stetsoning me?
Re: Graveyards by TwilightDawned	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/3:19 PM
"alive" at the end adds several variations Line 2: "that draws my vision" Good
Re: Sleepy Hollow by TwilightDawned	some deleted user 24.222.81.233	5-Jul-04/4:29 PM
I enjoyed the part about the master wiping his horse's ass.
Re: Blobby blob code ** by MR Blobby	Quarton 12.217.221.61	5-Jul-04/2:45 PM
You've got to be kidding! I'll give you a three just for having the guts to post it.
Re: Fury by J.B. Manning	Quarton 12.217.221.61	5-Jul-04/2:47 PM
Kind of like a bad soap opera. Sorry.
Re: transmutation by William Delacroix	Quarton 12.217.221.61	5-Jul-04/3:06 PM
I am speechless. So much written to say so little. You need to say more using an economy of words.
Re: ocd by FreeFormFixation	Quarton 12.217.221.61	5-Jul-04/3:08 PM
Well, you managed to gross me out.
Re: The lost perfume of my yellow-rose-Girl by Prince of Void	Shardik 24.130.62.63	5-Jul-04/9:11 PM
A freckled gnewt on Pcp.
Re: Virgin Bride by TwilightDawned	Shardik 24.130.62.63	5-Jul-04/9:12 PM
Fecund maggotry of the lowest rung.
Re: Forbidden by Chasz Misleading	zodiac 24.93.86.20	5-Jul-04/9:22 PM
If you think success is typical, you should take a look at the last 13,235 poems posted on poemranker.
Re: Panic by Bobjim	Nicholas Jones 137.44.1.225	6-Jul-04/2:43 AM
Fine, but where's the rest of it? I feel strangely unsatisfied.
Re: Panic by Bobjim	titan69 62.31.24.65	5-Jul-04/2:17 PM
run and keep running it stinks!
Re: escape by moonlightdance	titan69 62.31.24.65	5-Jul-04/2:20 PM
very good like it
Re: Worst Sex Ever by Brittanyy	titan69 62.31.24.65	5-Jul-04/2:25 PM
I love this poem its just like the stuff that happen to me. its just so funny. 10/10
Re: Worst Sex Ever by Brittanyy	titan69 62.31.24.65	5-Jul-04/2:31 PM
Ps. I dont mean i have a little dick
Re: Urbane Jane by MacFrantic	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/2:35 PM
This is good. Good title. Try removing "confined to" from "an air of vanity, thus giving her some choice. "faltered ego" seems imprecise, maybe faulted.
Re: Rainbow by TwilightDawned	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/2:38 PM
Rainbows don't flicker. Other images are inaccurate of language. It's a common theme and hard to do well.
Re: Rainbow by TwilightDawned	Quarton 12.217.221.61	5-Jul-04/2:43 PM
Short and sweet. Nice imagery.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/2:43 PM
Maybe it's about the Middle East. Actually, yeast doesn't rise. Tell me titan 69 is wrong.