Re: Panic by Bobjim	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/9:34 AM
Cute.
regarding some deleted poem...	sanity 80.46.131.4	5-Jul-04/2:09 PM
I love this, it seems to be the best of yours I have read on here so far
regarding some deleted poem...	titan69 62.31.24.65	5-Jul-04/2:09 PM
Oh you must!!! I can feel it rising know??
Re: Paradelle of Progress by Dovina	titan69 62.31.24.65	5-Jul-04/2:14 PM
It stinks it stinks stink it stink it it does?? it does stink
Re: Paradelle of Progress by Dovina	some deleted user 24.222.81.233	5-Jul-04/11:45 AM
I also remember my latest deposit.
Re: Revision by Dovina	wilco 66.162.22.123	5-Jul-04/12:19 PM
I like this one. When the rules become too concrete, there is little room left for invention. Poetry dies, indeed.
Re: Translation by Dovina	wilco 66.162.22.123	5-Jul-04/12:27 PM
Yes, I like this one.
Re: Paradelle of Progress by Dovina	wilco 66.162.22.123	5-Jul-04/12:28 PM
I'm not sure about the form. I'll have to learn about it and will hold my vote until I do so.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 66.162.22.123	5-Jul-04/12:31 PM
super-duper.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 66.162.22.123	5-Jul-04/12:35 PM
When I was in Florida last week, this crab tried to pinch my toe. So I tried to kick it and missed. Then I fell down and busted my ass.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 66.162.22.123	5-Jul-04/12:37 PM
got ya. so true.
Re: Worst Sex Ever by Brittanyy	wilco 66.162.22.123	5-Jul-04/12:39 PM
naughty, naughty.
Re: Mother nature's creation (Terza Rima sonnet) by sanity	edpeterson 68.79.1.86	5-Jul-04/8:27 AM
for you and I?????
Re: Your sad goodbye by sanity	edpeterson 68.79.1.86	5-Jul-04/8:29 AM
there is something catchy and appealing about this.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/9:03 AM
First verse is good because of the trap. How can knowing what to say stand up to the flutter of an eyelash? Tender and good.
Re: Tale of a mermaid by sanity	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/9:09 AM
I see the impassable path and your family's wrath, but not quite getting the last line. Was it really impassable?
Re: Paradelle of Progress by Dovina	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/9:14 AM
Note: The paradelle is one of the more demanding French fixed forms, first appearing in love poetry of the eleventh century. It’s a poem of four six-line stanzas in which the first and second lines, and the third and fourth lines, of the first three stanzas, must be identical. The fifth and sixth lines, which traditionally resolve these stanzas, must use all the words from the preceding lines and only those words. The final stanza must use every word from all the preceding stanzas and only those words. Here I have presented only the first stanza, hoping to perfect all six stanzas into a monumental epitaph. I can then die having accomplished a worthy life’s mission.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/9:23 AM
A charming interlude, if a bit long.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	5-Jul-04/9:33 AM
This, and your other poem about Mia, go together showing a lovely paring in a dismal home. I feel the pain and joy.
Re: When He's In Me by J.B. Manning	moonlightdance 69.134.115.231	5-Jul-04/9:33 AM
love the poem!