Re: pie man by DR Limerick	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	1-Jun-04/6:51 AM
There once was a chap called Simon, Who pranced around like Bill Wyman, But Bill he was not, The closest he got, Was splitting Mandy Smith's Hyman.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 66.0.86.62	1-Jun-04/8:00 AM
Before I got to the end of the first line, I knew the second was going to end in "I let out a yelp." Isn't that weird?
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.219.223.8	1-Jun-04/2:24 AM
Bingo.
Re: Dave by DR Limerick	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.219.223.8	1-Jun-04/2:27 AM
This sounds very much like... DAVE AIDS. http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=14609
Re: not titled by coolassbob	killingjuliet 142.163.145.103	31-May-04/10:18 PM
refreshing i like your style
Re: Web of darkness: Through a gold eye by suprembeaner	killingjuliet 142.163.145.103	31-May-04/10:19 PM
i don't like it it's pretty cliche
Re: Sex Mob by nothingtoanyone	killingjuliet 142.163.145.103	31-May-04/10:20 PM
like the descriptions sometimes a bit over the top though
Re: R.O.X. by InvertedEar	killingjuliet 142.163.145.103	31-May-04/10:22 PM
beautiful
Re: The Portal by geewhiz1962	killingjuliet 142.163.145.103	31-May-04/10:25 PM
i like the mystique you have alot of potential
Re: Ode to the bright one by tre	god'swife 4.232.108.31	31-May-04/11:09 PM
Title's all wrong. Should be called 'Ode To My Dildo On Loan'
Re: flying into the storm by herbgirlofbirkenau	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.126	1-Jun-04/3:12 AM
I looked at my backside in the mirror: it was covered in prawns. When that happens you know it's time to put down the pogo stick and get the fuck out of Shrimpsville. I'm Dick Bumston, P.I.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	1-Jun-04/6:18 AM
"the smell of your snatch lets me know that your bleeding there's a russet coloured jam rag in your pants and your needing the full action blood nappy before the jam rag begins to fall you say it best when you say nothing at all"
Re: Sex Mob by nothingtoanyone	zodiac 66.0.86.62	1-Jun-04/8:15 AM
Are you dyslexic?
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.210	1-Jun-04/9:37 AM
Beautiful! I wrote a similar letter to Jesus in heaven once but when I dropped it in the mail, it came back marked "address unknown." I'll bet Bukowski's address in hell would come back similarly stamped. You know, except for that rough part at the end, Jesus life (according to those stories about him) was unusual in its simplicity. A bible scholar with no children, no wife, no job (he probably knew a trade--cabinetmaker or something?) and, most of all, he was an idealist. Give all your money to the poor and follow me. Don't all political parties say something similar? Give your money to me and become poor. I don't think that these two guys had a clue about "daily living" in the 20th-21rst century. "Blessed are the understanding for they shall die in grotesque ways. I was a bum once in San Francisco who happened to go to the Symphony...But something about the music was not right. I preferred to listen to it on my radio." Talk about lowered expectations. I could live like Jesus or Bukowski if I expected nothing but inspiration in return. The rest of us gotta work to pay rent and ... Well, your poem has obviously punched my buttons. Both of these guys, however, not having a clue as to how to be a good parent would probably look you with admiration in their eyes and say, "You done good. See ya soon!" You're reply, I see, is "How would you know?" I wish there were an extra credit button in poemranker. I'd push it every time someone intrudes upon my daily fugue and wakes me up. [10+]
regarding some deleted poem...	caitydee 152.163.252.165	1-Jun-04/10:59 AM
I was disappointed to see that you had deleted all your poems. I enoyed reading them hun.
Re: Vibrissae by ggawrysi	caitydee 152.163.252.165	1-Jun-04/11:00 AM
Oh I'm sure you could train hamsters. Maybe you should write a poem about scottish midgets, or Irish midgets, could be interesting.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	1-Jun-04/11:36 AM
What a fucking joke, I wish JUST FOR ONCE, the stupid pointless shit that makes up your pathetic existence worked on me.
Re: Sex Mob by nothingtoanyone	horus8 24.130.62.63	1-Jun-04/11:39 AM
Unreadable BBQ'd tripe
Re: gideon jesus by herbgirlofbirkenau	DR Limerick 213.48.74.97	1-Jun-04/2:29 PM
Good well thought out poem
Re: Litany by zodiac	DR Limerick 213.48.74.97	1-Jun-04/2:39 PM
yep I like this 2 lots of feeling? 9