| Re: pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
burgerking33 69.242.53.159 |
21-Mar-05/3:05 PM |
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hello this is the person who you commented on about eat what you want. first of all, this may be the worst poem i have ever read in my entire life. you should try wrestling instead. oh, and your name is gay. thanks! i gave you a 0. hahahahahaha
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| Re: L.O.V.E. by bxjay170 |
christic1978 205.188.116.139 |
21-Mar-05/12:10 PM |
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its really sincere, but you need to check over your work for missing words and such before submitting.
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| Re: stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher |
Dovina 12.72.4.183 |
21-Mar-05/6:56 AM |
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Can we have some of you happy athiests speak out in rebuttal?
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| Re: Rusty knife to the kidney by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 12.72.4.183 |
21-Mar-05/6:51 AM |
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I liked it better before, but still good.
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| Re: A good little poem by INTRANSIT |
edpeterson 68.79.58.40 |
21-Mar-05/6:49 AM |
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good to hear you won't be needing that viagra regimen afterall.
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| Re: A good little poem by INTRANSIT |
Dovina 12.72.4.183 |
21-Mar-05/6:46 AM |
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Do you really need (bread) after "rye" and "possibilities" after infomercial. You did say it's a little poem. Thoughts turn rye is good. Why not infomercials piclke?
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| Re: a comment on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.134 |
21-Mar-05/1:04 AM |
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Who says we have to be serious all the time. I'm not so sure that life is at all a serious matter. I mean come on. What fun would that be?
<3 Jason
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| Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.42.229.217 |
20-Mar-05/8:19 PM |
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Only because the true kings feel like letting me be.
<3 Jason
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| Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
INTRANSIT 4.159.212.243 |
20-Mar-05/4:24 PM |
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i think I did a deep scan of this the first time. This time I swam in it. angry dust. perfect. 100. again.
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| Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
gregsamsa222 24.215.162.98 |
20-Mar-05/1:57 PM |
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It really wasn't written to be novel or new or the next 'howl' so thanks for reading it on its on terms.
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| Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
gregsamsa222 24.215.162.98 |
20-Mar-05/1:52 PM |
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No fair. I've currently got 'the best poem' on here but you've got a bajillion in the top 20. I think you're the reigning monarch of poemranker.
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| Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
gregsamsa222 24.215.162.98 |
20-Mar-05/1:50 PM |
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Thanks. At least I'm good for writing something.
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| Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
gregsamsa222 24.215.162.98 |
20-Mar-05/1:48 PM |
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hey--thanks, really, for all the thoughts on this poem. I posted it in july and kinda forgot about the site--suddenly i'm getting responses about it. I think the poem needs some work, and know it's not The Best Poem Ever, so critical input is appreciated. Plus... i must admit, if it inspires anyone to think about it longer than it takes to read it makes me feel as if I've managed to get SOMEthing across.
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| Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
gregsamsa222 24.215.162.98 |
20-Mar-05/1:44 PM |
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Thnx, Autumn. Perfection is a stretch, but so long as u liked it...
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| Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 |
gregsamsa222 24.215.162.98 |
20-Mar-05/1:42 PM |
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"Finally, something on the best list that deserves to be there. Well, at least until some anonymous fucking idiot knocked it off. *sigh* Oh well, one day all will be right."
Eh. Anonymous gets a lot of poem-lovin, some of it deserved.
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| Re: a comment on the search by i_am_the_popsicle |
i_am_the_popsicle 64.12.116.195 |
20-Mar-05/1:04 PM |
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only for those who understand taoism, and that number would be 0 (of course.)
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| Re: a comment on Clouds by dancin_n_da_moonlite |
dancin_n_da_moonlite 64.12.116.195 |
20-Mar-05/12:37 PM |
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thankyou ....... :)
-megan
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| Re: a comment on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.225.146.179 |
20-Mar-05/10:15 AM |
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Always, why shouldn't I be? I wrote the word "pus" and got six 10's for it. Because I'm good? No. Because someone thinks, that I'm a genius(silly girls and thinking). But its true none the less. How many crap poems of mine are in the top ten right now? Too many.
<3 Jason
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| Re: a comment on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.225.146.179 |
20-Mar-05/10:08 AM |
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lol. No, Angels and Demons was a good read but tedious, to pick back up again(It took me a month to sit down and finish it), so I decided against The Da Vinci Code, despite Dan Brown's great crafting of factual fictions.
<3 Jason
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| Re: a comment on Drinking before noon with Bukowski by Beyond_Dreams |
Dovina 12.72.8.105 |
20-Mar-05/6:39 AM |
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But greater pleasure comes when both emotional and sensual desires are tantilized, then fulfilled in both partners.
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