Re: a comment on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:48 AM
Christ your insouciant.
Re: WHY DAD?WHY? by RION12	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:47 AM
You should travel back in time 15 years and start a grunge band.
Re: pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:47 AM
1) Are you on The O.C.? 2) Are you reading The Da Vinci Code?
Re: No Worries by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:31 AM
Surely, indeed.
Re: a comment on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/2:27 AM
1) Speaking for myself, I get a kick out of butchering people who butcher the language. Do you see the difference? I bet not. And can you respond to this string without referencing your imaginary "incrowd"? There's surely an argument even without, but I bet you can't think of it. Or are too hung up on your playground-flashback bully-fantasies to want to. 2) Um, how about, "lost jot and tittle period and dash for colloquialisms sake"? Anyway, it occurs to me that whether or not you find a colloquialism without apostrophes, periods, or dashes, you've still lost. Dropping punctuation doesn't make something necessarily colloquial or more colloquial. They're just not related, and you're probably just using the wrong word. 3) What the fuck? 4) No incrowd, sorry. 5) dim and uncool are unrelated. Um, I don't explain them. I was being sarcastic. 6) Latecomers use it. If I do sometimes it's because I'm lazy. 7) ibid. 8) What the fuck? 9) I don't think you have a very good idea about anything, incrowdish or not. 10) I'd hate for you to leave. If I've ever suggested anything of the kind, I'm truly sorry. PS-Thanks for answering my points. It bothers me to no end when people don't.
Re: a comment on Sauvignon by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/1:31 AM
Oh. Then it's simply not a very good metaphor, or very useful in this poem. And I still find it hard to believe. But then I'm not Californian. Anyway, sorry :-(
Re: a comment on Pacifics by zodiac	zodiac 212.38.134.51	20-Mar-05/1:27 AM
Heh-heh, you're nutty. And if you're more than a precocious 17, I'll eat my own shmaugh. As for the poem, what can I say? It's about going to the ocean - a big fantasy of mine since I started living in the Middle Eastern desert. It might interest you to know the original version of this went, When we get out of here, I'll fuck You in an empty movie theatre. Is that any better?
Re: a comment on The Sidekick Retires From Fairview's Finest by luzrheroguy	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.24.26	19-Mar-05/11:54 PM
Yeah, I just thought I'd let you know that luzrheroguy is my user name as well. I'm mainly leaving myself the breadcrumbs of copyrighted intellectual property for my super hero satire of sorts. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.13.18	19-Mar-05/9:15 PM
1) Okay, I’ve hyperbolized. But certain renegade poet comedians seem to get a kick out of butchering the language to impress the incrowd. Call it making fun, but it’s just silly. And in case you wish to say that I am silly in other ways – admitted. 2) Colloquialisms and apostrophes go together sometimes, sometimes not. I don’t see how that’s related to anything. 3) Apparently you have concluded that “stuffy bastions of conservative poetry” are the same people as “renegade poet comedians” in my estimation. I hadn’t thought of it that way, but maybe they are so inconsistent as to be so. Thank you for that inspiration. 4) Have I use a passé word, “dim”? It just shows how out-of-touch I am with incrowd norms. 5) Many people on this site besides you say I am uncool, dim, dimtard or whatever the “in” terminology may be at the time. If there is no incrowd, how do you explain your comments at http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp;jsessionid=aweLoUJ7fS59?id=121987 6) But they use it. 7) They still use it. 8) I affect many atrocities. This is only one. 9) I should take credit when you admit a fault after I point it out. That’s the slanderous, incroud way to act. But I was not thinking of you when I wrote that. 10) No, I don’t think you are out to get me. Heck, if I leave, you’d have only CLS to pick on. So show me just enough respect that I don’t leave.
Re: a comment on Sophia, Lets get this over with by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.225.141.102	19-Mar-05/7:55 PM
Its written from the perspective of one of the character's in one of the short stories I'm writing. Glad you liked it. <3 Jason
Re: Youth by thepinkbunnyofdoom	juliharrelson 152.163.100.135	19-Mar-05/7:45 PM
awesome. Good grief, man! This is really good stuff.
Re: WHY DAD?WHY? by RION12	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.225.141.102	19-Mar-05/7:44 PM
I'm normally all about the emotional poems, but honestly? If this was pimple I might have cut you enough slack to give this a 5. As is, a 2. All you've done is bitch at someone whom I seriously doubt will read this. The rest of us, don't need to see this.
Re: Children in the Storm by thepinkbunnyofdoom	juliharrelson 152.163.100.135	19-Mar-05/7:38 PM
ANOTHER good one.
Re: a comment on pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.225.141.102	19-Mar-05/7:36 PM
lol, don't worry about that. Click the best Tab sometime.
Re: Sophia, Lets get this over with by thepinkbunnyofdoom	juliharrelson 152.163.100.135	19-Mar-05/7:35 PM
"Come, lets dance, with flames and silhouettes" I REALLY like that imagery. In fact, your whole poem was like I was right there. I was right. You ARE very articulate...and very intelligent. Poetry pretty much tells on a person, who they are and all that. A very good piece.
Re: No wonder I can't sleep when you are gone, but still here. by Haleyj	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.225.141.102	19-Mar-05/7:31 PM
Few typos, this is more "pimple" than "freeverse", and inside/mind. -6-
Re: a comment on The Sidekick Retires From Fairview's Finest by luzrheroguy	luzrheroguy 4.225.141.102	19-Mar-05/7:18 PM
Thanks. It did.
Re: pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	juliharrelson 152.163.100.135	19-Mar-05/7:11 PM
oooops. I forgot to vote
Re: pihsdneirf ruo fo dne eht(The Burn) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	juliharrelson 152.163.100.135	19-Mar-05/7:10 PM
I can tell you are a pretty intelligent person, maybe above average, and very articulate...I like this poem. I wrote one about being "burned" once....one of the phrases was .....new skin under the burns...... This poem brought it to mind. That's all I can remember of my "burned" poem. I was pretty crazy over that guy. I've forgotten all about him now, oh...and the poem was thrown away with the memory. That's all I could retrieve from that dusty part of my memory. Good stuff, pinkbunny-guy. I'll read some more of yours.
Re: The Sidekick Retires From Fairview's Finest by luzrheroguy	juliharrelson 152.163.100.135	19-Mar-05/7:03 PM
I really like the first verse a lot. It's smooth and clear: "My best was never enough Against you at your worst I'm always a close second Compared to your first" I like how it rhymes just here and there without sounding fake or funky. It sounds like it just flowed out that way.