Re: a comment on Memories by RION12	RION12 64.136.26.226	9-Mar-05/7:44 PM
I know I suck spelling and all that other crap but for some reason I just fucken care. That's just me. I really don't care for much.
Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	nentwined 64.81.38.95	9-Mar-05/7:42 PM
Ah, I'm getting you a lot more, now. I like the idea. :) I want to play with it myself, but will refrain until some inspiration strikes that allows me different words to rearrange.
Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	9-Mar-05/7:34 PM
Ultimately the idea is plum freedom. A hot walk is a determined walk, he has someplace to go but there's the fence issue. The games are very limited . Ball on the end of a rope. Four squares (walls). I'll save the other words. I may need them later.;/
Re: a comment on bleeding by crooked_smile	crooked_smile 205.188.116.195	9-Mar-05/6:40 PM
hmm thats nice.......though frankly i have know idea who you are, if you ever get a book let me know and i will check it out -lia
Re: bleeding by crooked_smile	frdup717 65.32.226.123	9-Mar-05/5:33 PM
cheerful (10) (on a happire note my poem ALONE was published!!!!!!!yay!!!!!!!!0
Re: a comment on Distance by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 64.12.116.138	9-Mar-05/4:54 PM
Seeing lightning makes me feel far from anything I could comprehend knowing about. Even so, there is so much lightning created that it becomes increasingly less impressive, visually.
Re: Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	the_poetess 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/4:29 PM
alot of your work tends to be good but it is extremely long and exhausting to read - might i suggest making it a bit shorter - it would be more effective and i bet more people would read it -emili
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	nentwined 64.60.192.130	9-Mar-05/4:23 PM
Nearly a decade of active practice on that, and I still hit the wrong tone sometimes. :) Often on the ranker it's hard to tell whether someone's just taking a piss and waiting for you to try to take them too seriously.
Re: a comment on don't know by the_poetess	the_poetess 205.188.116.195	9-Mar-05/4:21 PM
i dont eat at mcdonalds and i excersice and my job currently is being educated, so i am offered the luxary of not having to put bread on the table and i told you earlier, i often act pompous -emili
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	the_poetess 205.188.116.195	9-Mar-05/4:19 PM
you make a good point, and i will keep that in mind thankyou for being able to criticize without being rude or negative....... -emili
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	the_poetess 205.188.116.195	9-Mar-05/4:18 PM
i am having issues with our government as well.. canada, huh, i actually have family there, but i've never met them you have such a pretty name, just saying -emili
Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	edpeterson 68.79.52.31	9-Mar-05/4:16 PM
of a tractor's or of tractors'
Re: oops by jay_dace	crooked_smile 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/4:01 PM
nice but it would be that much stronger if you took off the "i think" tell us, don't speculate! without that it would be a 5 with that change more of a 9 ill meet you in the middle and give you a 7 -lia
Re: My days work by lucky_cmc	crooked_smile 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/4:00 PM
um, this was not, to be frank, very good a) we all have a days work to do, and you weren't really compelling enough to make me think yours was special 2)it was rather bland and run of the mill -lia
Re: untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote	crooked_smile 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:58 PM
i really like this.......... -lia
Re: don't know by the_poetess	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	9-Mar-05/3:56 PM
Why don't you?
Re: a comment on A Nation by the_poetess	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	9-Mar-05/3:54 PM
Of course you don't, otherwise you'd learn how to spell? Do you always come off as a pair of unworn chaps, or is that just your idea of a poetic haircut? See the problem with communism is simple, I don't like peasants, so why in the fuck should I support their lack of creativity, or individuality? I'd rather be a seperatist, or a fascist, and let them starve.
Re: Blessing in desguise by GekoHawaii	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:53 PM
i might like this better if i didnt have a strong distaste for rhyme -zarina
Re: with no words to write by nentwined	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:52 PM
i really really like this! -zarina
Re: Nitro by NNirvana13666	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	9-Mar-05/3:49 PM
a tad to cliche to be really good -zarina