| Re: Valentine's Day is Two Days Away and I Don't Feel Loved by MacFrantic |
Dovina 12.72.10.24 |
14-Feb-05/3:17 PM |
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"Her charming come-hithers" is good. The rest so-so.
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| Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.10.24 |
14-Feb-05/3:11 PM |
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Thanks, jroday, for the âicing.â
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| Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.10.24 |
14-Feb-05/3:07 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Goodbye by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.10.24 |
14-Feb-05/2:59 PM |
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| Re: Denied by Freethinker1602 |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
14-Feb-05/1:04 PM |
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I would Ke-Ke, but I don't date thee ethnic.
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| Re: Insanity by Lifeboatman |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
14-Feb-05/12:41 PM |
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You've obviously OD on chilled smegma.
Touch your toes, count to ten, and relax.
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| Re: a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove |
horus8 24.130.62.63 |
14-Feb-05/12:39 PM |
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"fire and plum"?
Brought a smile to my face, but the
rest bored me stupid.
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| Re: Poem Written on a Ketchup Stained Paper Plate by woodstock20000 |
brazen 68.82.113.254 |
14-Feb-05/3:18 AM |
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short, sweet, and 57 times to the point.
apparently, if i was junk food i'd be a cheeseball.
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| Re: The Man I Love by Dovina |
jroday 204.215.33.196 |
14-Feb-05/3:04 AM |
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No words come close, to what I see in you, but no words
can explain. None I can think of ever do.
Many words come to mind. As there's so much more. But no words can express. And no tongue can tell. Just what
I see in you, or how I feel as well.
Just putting a little icing on the cake, and good luck.
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| Re: The Man I Love by Dovina |
MacFrantic 205.188.116.67 |
13-Feb-05/9:01 PM |
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| Re: Simple by wilco |
Dovina 12.72.10.178 |
13-Feb-05/8:32 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
13-Feb-05/5:21 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Yes, D.A. Private Eye Guy by Luzr |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.42.248.89 |
13-Feb-05/11:31 AM |
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What do you expect, I was just a little drunk, by little a mean alot, when I wrote this.
<3 Jason
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| Re: Orion takes aim by oneglove |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.42.248.89 |
13-Feb-05/11:11 AM |
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Give him about 4 more months, he'll at least have it running south. -9-
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| Re: Plastic Explosive Iraqi-Man by Enkidu |
MacFrantic 152.163.100.67 |
13-Feb-05/9:52 AM |
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Ah, middle-eastern inspiration. I can't believe people failed to get this.
-Enkidu
-D. $ Fontera
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| Re: Insanity by Lifeboatman |
MacFrantic 152.163.100.67 |
13-Feb-05/9:48 AM |
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| Re: broken pieces of a candy heart by brazen |
MacFrantic 152.163.100.67 |
13-Feb-05/9:47 AM |
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Wow, single stanzas are ruling write now. In this, it happens to be the last. *7*
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| Re: Starless by MacFrantic |
MacFrantic 152.163.100.67 |
13-Feb-05/9:45 AM |
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There really should be more werewolf poems.
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| Re: a comment on Starless by MacFrantic |
MacFrantic 152.163.100.138 |
13-Feb-05/9:44 AM |
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And 200 years ago, I'd have not been born to see you do so.
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| Re: a comment on Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina |
wilco 24.165.207.93 |
13-Feb-05/8:39 AM |
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Actually I understand some of this comment a little more after reading the comments on "Goodbye". I don't think that you're arrogant and abrasive. You've got your ideas and thats what you write about. Everyone does it. You know as well as I do that people on The Ranker just like to pick at people to see how far they can push them (Bully Poets...there's an odd thing). It's actually funny because if they spent half as much time writintg as they did being assholes, this would be a better place. That's not going to happen though. For some reason they've pretty much stopped with me...either because I've gotten better at writing or because I'm just no fun to taunt because I dont care...I suspect the latter ;). I saw one kid even wrote a poem about you...and it wasn't crass and ignorant..amazed me but you gotta love that. The point is, there's good and there's bad and it's all what makes the poemeranker the best of it's kind.
P.S.-I know you already know all this and I don'y mean to preach to the choir.
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