Re: a comment on Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000	wilco 24.165.207.93	10-Feb-05/4:08 PM
Like a good little boy, I only pray when I REALLY, REALLY want something from the big guy.
Re: Separation by Dovina	wilco 24.165.207.93	10-Feb-05/4:04 PM
As I've said before, I'm not a big fan of the Bible poems. This is mainly because I am wholly uneducated regarding Christianity, and mainly because what I have learned about it is utter bollocks. Due to my limited knowledge of the subject matter, I'll hold my vote.
Re: a comment on Separation by Dovina	wilco 24.165.207.93	10-Feb-05/4:02 PM
are you that thick? I didn't think you were.
Re: A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle	7!3 219.95.8.236	10-Feb-05/3:46 PM
excellent! lol
Re: a comment on Before I met you by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.	Shuushin 147.154.235.51	10-Feb-05/2:11 PM
I think I've been pretty specific here on what needs to be fixed. Just keep writing and strive to have a reason for every word you put down on the paper.
Re: a comment on "I" became "We" by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.	*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 65.93.137.250	10-Feb-05/1:59 PM
Thank-you SupremeDreamer I just don't know how to post it as a pimple now that it is submitted without deleting the comments..........Lindsey...
Re: a comment on Before I met you by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.	*.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* 65.93.137.250	10-Feb-05/1:46 PM
Thanx a lot I really appreciate the comments (good or bad) although I wish people could tll me what I do worng in them so I can fix them because apparently my poems suck ass but you know how it goes peace out ....Lindsey....
Re: a comment on Goodbye by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.12.90	10-Feb-05/1:14 PM
Oh, I can fight! What, your father can't? Math teacher, huh?
Re: Goodbye by Dovina	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.1	10-Feb-05/11:02 AM
What! You can"t fight no more Like my father? Your friend the math teacher.
Re: a comment on Wedding Poem by al-naafiysh	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.49	10-Feb-05/8:18 AM
Have you ever been married before? The reason I say my goal is..." in verse is,because at first it was wonderful, after that he became m.f. to live with, but I did'nt want to leave because I thought he would change. I wanted my marriage to be like my father and mother's. I know no marriage has the perfect union,and the last verse is reality for some women. you give your all and all, and still get hurt. Dont get me wrong it happen's both ways. Your friend the math teacher.
Re: A Metahaiku by dbond	Dovina 12.72.4.192	10-Feb-05/8:06 AM
What's kigo?
Re: Beating heart by celticskatermatt1	Dovina 12.72.4.192	10-Feb-05/8:04 AM
Good up through line 3, except for spelling. After that it gets trite.
Re: The Sleep Fantastic by nentwined	Dovina 12.72.4.192	10-Feb-05/7:56 AM
You're being imbic with a myth-like tale. But in a few places you sacrifice clarity for it. In Line 6, I thought "was" is distracting. And if being imbic is important, then why the lapse in Veres 3. Line 3? Like it.
Re: The Tree by Joe-joe	7!3 219.95.8.236	10-Feb-05/5:55 AM
nice :)!
Re: charred pixels by FreeFormFixation	7!3 219.95.8.236	10-Feb-05/5:44 AM
not bad.
Re: Recess by horus8	7!3 219.95.8.236	10-Feb-05/5:38 AM
nice :)
Re: a comment on Epitaph of Innocence by woodstock20000	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	10-Feb-05/3:58 AM
Some people never pray. They must have no sense of morality.
Re: a comment on Matthew's Bastard by Caducus	Caducus 172.200.59.27	10-Feb-05/1:30 AM
With a name like Doug who the fuck are you to try and leave a wisecrack? Knob jockey.
Re: a comment on Separation by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.14.17	10-Feb-05/1:26 AM
re: "You missed completely that this is a story, not a didactic presentation of grand statements." We tend to do that with your poems. That is an honest and apt criticism. So there. And for that matter, what do you mean by "honest and apt" criticism anyway?
Re: a comment on Separation by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.14.17	10-Feb-05/1:06 AM
Is Dovina really hypatia? If so, I'm flabbergasted. And truly sorry.