Re: Activating your Infinity by horus8	unouluvme 66.167.67.53	27-Jan-05/3:54 PM
to much like a story
Re: In Answer To Your Question by Dovina	Shuushin 147.154.235.52	27-Jan-05/2:59 PM
3 spaces between comma and the "I'll" in the 3rd stanza I guess it works as a "prose poem" - but why? This could be said in far fewer words and cleaner as a less verbose (or nounose) poem.
Re: Your Eyes Are Like Stearling Saphires in the month of June by tisa7	Shuushin 147.154.235.52	27-Jan-05/2:37 PM
Hi t7 - a pretty thing, but a couple spellings: "Sterling", "Sapphires" and "threw" should be "through" and I don't know if you meant "painful" or did the painflu on purpose. "in to" should prolly be "into"
Re: Devil, Devil, Hear Me Pray by PsydewaysTears	Dovina 205.184.71.11	27-Jan-05/11:58 AM
Anything with suicide in it deserves a zero, but because of Verse 4 and the first half of Verse 6, you get a 7.
Re: Nybbas' Lamentation by Y2kSlamPoet	Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2	27-Jan-05/4:32 AM
just savor it, Dreamer... it may or may not come back.. but, hey, there still AIDS.. 10 as always
Re: thoughts on a long lazy day by francis nor capule	Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2	27-Jan-05/4:29 AM
Damn.. these things are vague.. but gives you that warm toasted feeling like marshmallows left in the sun.. 10
Re: Devil, Devil, Hear Me Pray by PsydewaysTears	Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2	27-Jan-05/4:26 AM
haha.. anything with the devil in it deserves more than a ten... but, alas, we only have up to ten and the devil doesn't exist... life is unfair
Re: a comment on #28 by Lifeboatman	Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2	27-Jan-05/4:24 AM
what's eating you up these days, dude... poor diet?? How've you been anyway??
Re: a comment on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.68.193.228	26-Jan-05/5:52 PM
Actually The Male Character does it. Its part of the short coming to livejournal near you soon. <3 Jason
Re: On the Discovery of Cinder Cats and The Road More Traveled by MacFrantic	REWellman 69.63.40.81	26-Jan-05/4:11 PM
Very funny little poem. I like the second stanza a lot more than the first and I think it could stand alone. It's very cute.
Re: a comment on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.68.193.228	26-Jan-05/2:30 PM
One extra? and yes 6 roses, they were dipped in wax, pink my favorite color and ment to be a suprize that ended up in the trash. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on The Difference by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.68.193.228	26-Jan-05/2:24 PM
Jesu loves you my son? lol. yea, a bit preachy, but sometimes thats how the best conversations are. <3 Jason
Re: Lonely People by april fool	Doug 65.32.114.161	26-Jan-05/1:57 PM
There's a party in my pants tonight, and everyone's invited. I hope your all excited?
Re: Birth by Caducus	Doug 65.32.114.161	26-Jan-05/1:52 PM
Yawn
Re: Matthew's Bastard by Caducus	Doug 65.32.114.161	26-Jan-05/1:51 PM
You poor fucker. Get over it pussy! Oh,and your poem sucks big black panther nuts.
Re: Before I met you by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.	Doug 65.32.114.161	26-Jan-05/1:46 PM
Do your parents know your posting this crap?
Re: "I" became "We" by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.	Doug 65.32.114.161	26-Jan-05/1:43 PM
This is a joke,right? If not please seek help - Such as english 101 or some kind of therapy.
Re: Some Thoughts On Seeing Alec Baldwin Jogging by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Doug 65.32.114.161	26-Jan-05/1:34 PM
fleck.
Re: MENSA's For Fags Like Me by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Doug 65.32.114.161	26-Jan-05/1:32 PM
Not funny or clever? So what is this? Just lame.
Re: a comment on B.L.C. LONG GONE by jroday	jroday 204.215.33.218	26-Jan-05/1:29 PM
You're right I meant to say full of wonder