Re: Hate the Contestant by Blindpoetry	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	17-Jan-05/8:40 AM
I'll have to look up the connection between michael moore and bands - brb
Re: a comment on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite	Blindpoetry 68.11.192.79	17-Jan-05/8:33 AM
Yeah. Well. I know a certain Angel who's done the same
Re: Rendered Genderless by PsydewaysTears	tangerinepuddle 69.240.74.35	17-Jan-05/8:21 AM
you know I love this one, but I do agree with dancin n da moonlight's comment....doesn't need to go on quite as long
Re: a comment on the pretenders by PopoyMola	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/6:06 AM
Shut the fuck up.
Re: a comment on Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/6:03 AM
PS-I'm a butchier feminist than all of you together. You can try some 'look at the guys ganging up on my poem' shit till you're blue and puffing, but then I'll probably just pull out my engorged member and bludgeon you comatose with it.
Re: a comment on Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/6:00 AM
If either of you have ever played baseball, sat in a dugout during a baseball game, watched a baseball game on TV, or by any other means other than fiction seen a baseball player adjust himself, then I am currently eating my best hat.
Re: a comment on In the Shadows by Beyond_Dreams	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:57 AM
Is Herald the Count's name or a verb?
Re: a comment on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:56 AM
This is a pathology of vote-grubbing asskiss.
Re: American Semele (Edit) by Sasha	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:52 AM
This would have been better if it was "American Smell". What is the American Smell? Bacon and shag carpet.
Re: Rendered Genderless by PsydewaysTears	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:45 AM
PS-I was expecting to read a poem about being rendered genderless, which I've always imagined being able to do on some impermanent basis. Unless by "eat the ham" you mean something below my capacity for contemplation, this is not even close.
Re: In The Beginning by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:42 AM
I'm displeased to find you're back to your old self-righteousness. You were better when you didn't have all the answers. Kind of lovable, even, like a hamster.
Re: Rendered Genderless by PsydewaysTears	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:41 AM
Can you write a rhyme without it being a total nonsequitor? I bet not. The best part was the ham bit.
Re: a comment on Tra-la-la by Lifeboatman	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:40 AM
Do you know what part of a chick's anatomy the birth canal is? Do you know what grows there? Yeast, and about nothing else.
Re: a comment on Stopping at the oak (draft) by Caducus	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:37 AM
I know what a banshee is. The confusion was "haunting in the omen of" one. Presumably, you mean in the banshee's song, which is an omen of death, rather than an omen predicting a banshee itself, which would be bizarre, redundant, and require a whole substructure of meta-banshees to appear before the banshees proper. By "haunts", I imagine you mean simply "exists in a kind of scary way" which is how you used it in your comment above, so you can use "in" after (ie, "haunts in the wind") rather than the more common and understandable "haunts the wind" or "haunts the omens of banshees"). Anyway I essentially got to the person "you" haunting in the haunting song of a haunt before I got totally flummoxed. It could have been so much easier.
Re: a comment on Only Me by heartlessempath	zodiac 212.118.14.17	17-Jan-05/5:30 AM
Did you think "In Country" was a very good book?
Re: a comment on Tra-la-la by Lifeboatman	Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2	17-Jan-05/4:46 AM
must always be sensual and shouldn't be taken otherwise...
Re: Recognition by nentwined	Caducus 172.189.154.57	17-Jan-05/2:37 AM
You've managed to create one of those sayings like twain or wilde and done so in the limits of a haiku so brrrravo its def one of the best on here.
Re: a comment on Stopping at the oak (draft) by Caducus	Caducus 172.189.154.57	17-Jan-05/2:32 AM
Damn you're right and when I posted this I wanted the grammar cops to beat me senseless till I resembled jackie stallone. To explain my use of banshee its a female spirit which haunts in the wind so it does make sense but the meter and all the other points you mentioned are spot on. I've done better and a lot worse but I'll let this John Merrick piece breathe itself into its own death.
Re: a comment on Only Me by heartlessempath	Shuushin 64.222.180.230	16-Jan-05/10:40 PM
drop me a line if you change it, then I'll pour over it again.
Re: a comment on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	Shuushin 64.222.180.230	16-Jan-05/10:39 PM
a golden oldie, thanks!