Would you be kind enough to say why you didn't like the last lines of the last five stanzas? Just so I'm made aware of it's flaws. Thank you for reading and commenting on my piece, I've always had a fondness for your work, and it's an honor to receive your feed-back.

You aren't an uncouth bum, you are a Mature Poete, and hence aren't invited.

in the comment: 'By: Anne Sexton'.

You must forgive zociac. He's lost most of his vision and 90% of his frontal lobe over there in Karak. We all try to pitch-in with the tedious chore of interpreting his comments. This time I'm afraid he's seen a host of periods and thought they were colons. How he thought they are excellently used I can't say, but, again, please forgive him. Actually all these periods are a bit like pepper sprinkled about where often a comma, or even no mark at all would suffice, don't you think. Would you like to join the Zodiac Protection Charity?

id say that depends on whether you mean the poem or the comment, but id be lying. either way, the answers no.

it is. don't diss.

Have you read it yet?

ignoring all but the last 5 words, i take that as a compliment

Well then, oak tree limbs do look weird sometimes. You are the weird one.

of course i have. like with this poem. i've only read the first line.

Have you never followed the easiest path?

Thank you for the invitation of membership in The Rutherford Club. So nicely phrased. I must, however, decline due to prior commitments.