-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on Limbs by Dovina
10 Dec 2004, 4:14 PM
What a squalid and ignoble dunce cap, on a poetic career of steadily diminishing returns. -10-
A delightful fancy that seem calling for meter, even rhyme. I'd sacrifice rhyme though for a steady rhythm.
Are you the lightning, the oak or the result of the meeting of the two? I like being the moss on the North side never seeing the sun. The lightning was bright. It was fun to watch.
Love is a dog from hell- Charles Bukowski.
Love is a live dog in a Korean kitchen (non-existent)-Dan garcia-Black
Pillow Talk
Young studs with plenty of anal action!
PILLOW TALK ... A sensational journey into the bedroom and beyond its boundaries. There hasn't been so much action in the bedroom since the beginning of man. These boys are performing up to snuff and the talk is so sensual that you'll be cuming in your pants.
From: Horizon Video
Year: 1999
Length: 90 Minutes
Director: Joel Cox
Starring: Peter Arayo, Damian Gaelic, Christian Johnson, David Michaelson, Jeff Sons, Ralph Steadman, Joe Treadman, Mike Wort
Themes: Anal Sex, Big Dicks, Bodybuilders, College Age, Deep Throat, Large Cocks, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Rimming ( Eating )
Format: VHS
Quite good.
1The name was interesting, but it was too long to read properly.
You are a big posh sod, with plums in your mouth.
You will likely be shocked, but not dismayed upon learning, which I urge you to do, that a plum only carries the meaning -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. imputed when stripped of its ordinary, dictionary definition.
How delightfully topical!
What the fuck have you got as grounds for misuse? this is a rating website, so you're a colossal twat, get over yourself cocknose. I can see it now fuzzylogic(plaintiff) versus the world - reason for the case, people called me names on a website, Christ's wet nappy you're a snivelling lump of stale shoe butter.
Watching it plummet in value?
I'm compiling a list of things nentwined was probably doing with -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I.'s $1 instead of server maintenance during the week poemranker was down. Freely contribute.
zodiac
replying on Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart
9 Dec 2004, 6:01 AM
Excellent use of colons.
You dumb. "Americanism" just means "a phrase or term originated in America."
The idea that you use "ordinary words with their ordinary definitions" to point out anything is preposterous. That's exactly what -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. does and you don't. That's how he knew that "shocked" and "dismay" are, respectively, adjective and noun forms of the same fucking thing, and "urging" doesn't mean what you think it does, and you didn't.
Plum. You have no idea what any of the words you use actually mean.
In Arabic, the expression "she thought" sounds like "fuck-rat"; the expression "he thought" sounds like "fuck-'er".
jessicazee
on Dancing in Memories: Slipping Away In The House On The Hill by Stacy Stewart
8 Dec 2004, 11:20 PM
A little confusing point-of view-wise but I am into it big time anyways?
I like this enough to spend a little time with nitpicking...
A few comments: (as I read it out loud):
Line 10: omit "the scent of" - better w/out it
Line 11: Just "cast", not "casted"
Paragraph break after line 14 ..."balcony."
Line 15: "Gazed in awe" is kind of cliche-y.
Line 18: He already gave you his hand a few lines back.
Line 27: "thought" instead of "though", ok...
Sorry to analyze too much ..guess I kind of like the fantastical aspect of this poem. Like I like the movie "Willow". Or "The Neverending Story." But not the "Neverending Story Part II." That may have sucked worse than "Grease 2" with Michelle Pfeiffer.