One can only hope. I think it's terrible that so many people feel they have to scorn the true message of Christmas. Yes, my views may not be trendy, they may not sound like a barrel of laughs when sat next to a week stuffing your face and watching T.V, but there really is more to life than getting presents. Dovina would do well to think about that over the coming weeks. Thanks for listening, and God bless. -10-

Dark Angel Thanks for those encouraging words, a 10 score was very generous where can I go from here? ps the missing word was day

Dovina Is that a Michael Jackson bad

See if you can guess the missing word. [1 mark]

It's a school full of innocent children.

Everyones life follows logic. Almost always to the point of being illogical. Now, get down to the market and get yourself some camel poo for the Mrs. to cook up for your supper.

that's pretty harsh huh?

No. but you can still make this better. I think the rythm does work for it. I've given up on I/P. At least until I get my grammar right.

Next you'll be asking for iambic pentameter.

yeah! and if you can keep it nine lines long, that would rule!!

I'm touched. You can be my friend.

In digging deep and hacking bold For hells and edens, rust and gold, . . . Might work, thanks.

I only wanted to be your friend.