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on "I post here cause I have a lot of readers" by Bachus
20 Nov 2004, 12:18 AM
it was not bad.
interesting poem... hope your other poems are better! :)
Oops. Crap.
i think the point of the last line was to rhyme? dunno. even that,... lol funny
that, my friend, is a fat man singing
pretty good------chelsea
maybe it sounds annoying coz it sounds unfinished...
but hey, sorry you had to be hungry. breakfast is the most important meal of the day, you know! lol
lol yea, it's bad.. but it made me laugh!
best among the worst?
lol...
liked it
it was... O.K.. i like your other poem, "sunshine" better..
lol i enjoyed this. nice one!
lol i think i like the comments more than the poem
i read the editors note and after that skipped. good intro, tho lol
Your from England. How dare you judge our president. President Bush is way better than John Kerry. John Kerry had Botox injections. To me that sounds a little dumb because he doesn't look any better.
I have to disagree with your apparent assessment of Zodiac's poems. If you actually READ them, I think you will find they do not lack feeling, nor art.