Dovina
replying on Moses by Dovina
19 Nov 2004, 11:41 AM
We're not talking about seeing it, obviously, but going there. It's a figure of speech, the like of which you seemm incapable of grasping.
Is this an example of what your learned in three years as a math major? Shame!
You are wrong on all counts and especially on No. 6. My dictionary, read in the feeling of the time, is a history written ahead of the events in the same way Shakespeare was in some parts of it. Anyone who cannot see simple relationships, out of time, out of place, like that, can only write unfelt poetry having a form of art, but lacking any feeling, such as yours.
Congrats. Previously it was only the poem that was stupid. Following your defense of, it is now clear you are stupid.
Your second comment is true, but "1M9" in base 35, has 1 in 35*35s column, 22 in the 35s column and 9 in the units column.
35*35 + 22*35 + 9 = 2004.
In base 36 you're looking at year 1KO.
These wings are invincible (poetic license).
i think you are referring to resonance.
What are you vague/unclear about?
That depends on whether you assume God to be alive or not, because if you do, you also assume that He had to begin and at some point, end. This would mean He is not timeless and you raise all sorts of philosophical questions that I can't be bothered to discuss right now.
Look at the year "1M9". 1 is in the hundreds' place. M is in the tens, and 9 is in the ones. That gives you 1 hundred, 22 tens, and 9 ones, or 1 + 22(10) + 9, or the year 329. Ergo, what the fuck are you on about? Mastery, indeed.
I'm afraid, though, we're all horribly mistaken calling it base-35. A base "where digits above 9 are written using letters A - Z" is BASE-36, since zero counts as one of the digits, the way a base using the positive digits up to nine is base-10.
I blame -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I.
Oops. And in the online "novelization", it's spelled "jigowatts".
1) Yes, but the reverse of "love" is best "is/are loved by". Therefore the reverse of "I love you" is "You are loved by me."
2) The diametric opposite of "I love you" is still "I don't love you", the same way the diametric opposite of, say, "object X is a square" isn't "object X is a circle"; it's "object X is not a square." Whatever the hell you mean by diametric. Even richa says so below.
3) Since you're using dictionary.com, try this: http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q =contrary
4) Your a turd. How's that for logical correctness? Language is mathmatical, and math is a language. Being a math undergrad for three years taught me to use language more precisely, in a way being an English major for seven years never did. And need I say you couldn't convincingly relate the experience of a turd to a turdbowl? What you imagine is the "life" related in your poems is only intelligible to yourself, and only glancingly so.
5) Again, this poem is trying to be a philosophy/math poem. You've filled it up with philosophy gobble which you don't get. When we held you to the standards you set for it by doing so, you said "oh no, it isn't a philosophy poem, it's felt life." Bow'ls.
6) Answer my fucking point about the "history written ahead of the fact." All you've said is I'm complaining about it. Well, duh!
Is it possible, that once logical correctness has been established, you can then "stretch life metaphorically" to the point where the logically correct conclusion is shown to be false? If so please give an example.
Would you not agree that your poem would be more impressive if it made philosophical/logical sense, and conveyed the "feeling" which you wish to achieve? I don't see why you couldn't, except for a knee jerking reaction against DA and Zodiac.
As has been discussed on this site innumerable times there is a big difference between good emotions and good poetry.
am i reading this right? you're stating God evolved?
I was wrong about reciprocal. The first two lines are premises leading onto the third line. Line 2 does not lead on from line 1. Probably need to make clear that 'i hate you' and 'i have no feelings for you' are new premises and not part of 'i love you' too.
Devolution as in 'of government'. Scotland has its own parliament but still has an effect on england's way of life. I get the feeling the narrator would be quite glad to see the back of scotland altogether.
Yes Dovina jroday is really my father,Iam sorry about the spelling and grammar, but I was in a hurry to get to the hospital today.As for him dying the doctor said yesterday It don't look good being this is the second surgery for the same
thing,but he's a strong man, and a fighter. He talk to me about you before he had surgery. so I know you know what's going on.
He's in almost like a coma state right , but I will keep you informed. THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR FAMILY.
Wings are not invincible.
Dissonance has to do with sounds.
Other vaguenesses follow.
It's a good image but lacks clarity.