I would but I don't use instant messengers since this isn't my computer.

I don't have a link...I wrote this at a museum, but I'm sure you could find it if you did a search.

Yes, I think that's better, and am even more happy to know that my but is not so big after all.

If her broad smile lightens your load, be careful, my friend. She remembers one from long ago. You are but a substitute. Maybe. Smaller is good. Diamonds are small (Even the big ones). B-ig T-houghts in S-mall P-ackages are better than diamonds. I think 'Schisms' is a BTSP. Ergo 'Big.'

Ta.

well yeah, the poem is really focused on humans and God. the frankenstein thing just got my brain working. so whereas the monster wa groteque on the outside and kind on the inside(at least at first) we are the opposite. im me. backwoodnation

i see your point but theres somethings that would be lost in changing of the lines... frigid air conquest is important because birds fly south (signals overhead) when cold air is taking over, and while standing outside theres always a scent of fire coming from somewhere far off. the smell of it always seem to mask that bit of coolness in the air. thats why the refrences to a battle seemed to make sense

I might just end with line 11, might be stronger for being smaller. What's so good about big?

Small

"behind outward beauty" threw me for a curve on that one but yeah, but other than that I get it. So hows college life treating you? <3 Jason

Like the imagines are missing links by slight misuses of syntax.

actually its based on the parallels between dr.frankenstein and his creation and God and his creation