Being preceded by lines all ending in commas the line break 'the skies above/ me dance' gives me a headache. The poem has nice sounds. Not sure what 'pressing into me your ice cold' is all about. Perhaps something to do with the morrissey song 'Phallus in a freezer'.

Utter nonsense.

Another swell read.

A jewel, a real gem.

A lit queef -=8=-

A grammaric nightmare, but there's some salvagable stuff in there, somewhere.

A quartered pine nut.

The end fell apart for me, but the beginning was really good stuff.

Helo, here's another welsh poet! Helo, dyma bardd arall cymreig!

I love this poem....it offers inspiration to many of us...the heart always does know and we can really fly...

This is great...this last Summer I actually saw an ice cream truck and his little bell was ringing lol I wanted to run after him....ahhh the good ole days....nothing will ever compare to them....definately this poem brought back memories so it is a 10....

asstasstic. bonus points for the form of ass, and paradox, and continuity.

Interesting to say the least.

fly baby fly the only way to keep alive is to keep dreaming. like the kiddish simpilicty.

The temptation is you or the poem, i a have feeling of happening\s or is it the title that brings the read to such a high.... life is one hell of a bleeding unend, not when for a woman , this is the very sacrifice life demands of her, painful if then love a smokescreen to cool the nerve or fool her away the truth of life is denied and turns a party in the very game of adding to the pains of humanhood, rose never cease the bleed keep the fire for nothing, for poetry to continue the circle of birth to life.

I think it's good lol made me laugh...

I thought this poem was absolutely great!