-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on She washed over me by nentwined
19 Sep 2004, 2:36 PM
"like water" - an excellent simile. Well done!
Excellent!
The best poets are surely the best critics. They are the most important critics of their own work. If poemranker were blessed with any fine writers, that writers opinion would be more valuable than anyone elses. Therefore their voting on their own poems would give a truer reflection of how good the poem is. If the poet voting on his own work were not very good then the value his poems attained would be false. That is not a problem though because that person does not matter anyway.
Next to The Eternal Darkness of Xanthar, The Eternal Darkness of Toridees is only mildly overcast, with light to moderate winds, and a small chance of showers in the afternoon. You don't scare me, old man.
Thank you, dear eponymous LittleWeenis for the anonymous vote and the user vote that so clearly show my inadequacies that I was unable to see before. I know you are unable to do something of that nature simply out of anger and therefore I humbly bow to you and your bow'ls for all the good low votes you give me.
Thank you LittleWeenis, for showing me the error of my ways, you have touched my heart to song.
Wow. Your own self opinion was almost as accurate as the anatomically fitting username you've picked.
Dark Angel:
You should no longer question what it is that I do...... for what I do is in the name of and has been blessed by The Lord Thy God. For on this planet which has been referred to as "The Earth" I Am the "I Am"...... The Word.
Now that I have been informed that "this cause," known by "The Earthlings" as "The Poemranker Website," was created for me, for my own enjoyment "all alone," and for me to announce to the world "at large" The Truth that God has given to me and for me to share with the rest of the world This Most Solemn Truth, it would be much better for you, your own self, that is, if you made a determined effort to no longer hinder my Most Sacred Cause on "This Earth, for if you do not choose to cease and desist these of your "most unsacred moves," perhaps "The Council of The Gods of The Several Universii" shall be forced to cast you into "The Eternal Darkness of Toridees," which is a place that no one should wish to have themselves placed by "The Council."
And one more thing............... Know thatI am "The Appointed One" on "This Earth" to "suggest" to "The Council" where everyone shall be sent upon the advent of "The Chosen Time" (that is "The Chosen Time" as set forth by "The Gods"), therefore you may want to consider your options Dark Angel as.............. "I shall choose to have mercy upon those who have been merciful to me, and I shall choose to judge those who, in turn, have choosen to judge me"............... Hola Rama Causa Shobe Ben Rubaa Twan Clofein!
Dr. Doug Soderstrom, Ph.D........ As The Appointed One
While I am sure you are very qualified to judge your own poetry, being the one who excreted it from your sticky hands, you may like to let others vote on your poems, and refrain from voting on them yourself. Granted, your own self-opinion is a completely accurate indicator of how good your poetry actually is and self-absorbtion is the only way to get an honest objective picture of yourself, and also granted that the number of IPS from which you are able to vote "anonymously" runs in direct proportion to the value of your opinion, I must ask you not to do so, if only so that those who are not as great and important as the poetry God you most indubitably and immutably are can have their humble opinion included in equal weight to your own.
It's neither thought, feeling, nor force. It's a word. And a very silly word at that. If no one had said the word to you, and if you hadn't read it in a load of confusing sentences about the eternal gobbledegook, you wouldn't even dream of prancing around like an urchin, wondering, desperately wondering, whether or not the word was actually an inner gateway to the Higher Realms of Xanthar.
Good.. Struck a chord in me..
How dare you boast about having a higher maturity ranking than me? You know nothing of maturity. You're a self-righteous wally with a massive chip on your shoulder. I, on the other hand, am a leading candidate for the poemeranker maturity award:
http://www.poemranker.com/suggestion-bro
I really liked this poem, especially the lines, "We made jokes and we stole glances. Wished we were each others heart enchantment."
Try one more.
shit
hey dark angel
ur sarcasm intrigues me, but most of all it makes me laugh. people like u in australia are what are known as "classics", let me elaborate on that for u. i noe for a fact that u dnt care what people rite about u. in fact u appreciate when people jugde u because u find joy in giving them more of a reason to hate u by ur replies. this isnt about the aids issue because im soooooo over it that im under it. (literally). its about moral ethics. i can assure myself that i am at least half ur age and yet my level of maturity seems to be soo much higher. if u have nothing better to do then to sit here and make poems which make absolutely no sense then go for it, who is anyone to stop u. im glad i got the message to u and id like to thank you for reading my 1st message without 'prejudice'. im just waiting for the day u click with reality cuz u obviously noe ur facts about aids, which i must say, even though u use in a sarcastic tone tends to impress me about ur knowledge.so have a greeat day and 'TEARGAS_HEADLIGHTS' tahnks for ur reply.
Oh beat oh shit!
That's what's funny.
Jerry-was-me - you know what's funny?
Time will tell!
Far past this sad little site!
You leave the reader anxious to find out the outcome...lots of mystery in your poems...this one I liked too....