wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
replying on A Poem by BigB
10 Sep 2004, 1:52 AM
Hee hoo
And besides, what are you doing paying for internet access? For God's sake, man! You're not a tourist, so stop acting like one.
P.S. I've never had the pleasure of visiting "mices walk-in internet shop". What's it like?
I disagree. If B is true, A must be false. If it is a certainty that X is possible (i.e. B), then it is wrong to describe that certainty as a possibility (i.e. A).
the only unsinkable ship is a FRIENDship. HAR HAR.
"When family die its not funny
It makes me feel runny"
Classic. You call for seriousness, and then, on the very next line, say that you "feel runny."
Dynamite parody. 10.
Moist, but dry at the end.
Margh...
It's a lovesong MOTHERFUCKER. lol
Are you kidding?
Sorry so harsh, but you really need a lot of work!
When you'll find love?
mind if I go hurl in the next room.
YEUCH!!!
Shit you're bad. This is the most sappy stuff I've read in a long time.
Life without love is a life's loss?????
God. Look, Chef, why don't you send this dribble you cooked up to Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul XXXVII. I believe they have an opening, as they always do, for shit that rambles, rhymes, and really means absolutely nothing. Go ahead. You're hurting the internet.
Aww. How distinctively pathetic.
Your Revealed feelings only prolongs the time till your heart is broken
once again??
What the fuck is that? I believe you meant "prolong" and not "prolongs." Actually, you might want to take that whole line out. Or maybe you want to take the whole stanza; it adds nothing to the poem. Actually, just take out the entire poem. It adds nothing to this site.
Jesus. You are sooooooooo good. It just amazes me. The beginning of nearly every line with "I" provides a sense of continuity that more than makes up for the disjointed yet comfortingly predictable lines. It is hard to believe that this is the work of an adolescent struggling to keep it together.
A well deserved 10
HAHAHAHAHA
Fooled ya, didn't I.
No. Sorry. I was kidding. This poem sucks. I know it's hard to bear someone telling you that but it does. It reminds me of the soppy crap of my English teacher way way way back in my freshman year of highschool: Self-righteous, cliché, and about as articulate as George Bush while talking to the cop who pulled him over for drunk driving.
A well deserved 0.
RUN & HIDE