klosterfobik
on Forever Lasting by ChefKSP
8 Sep 2004, 4:37 PM
I found the hidden message!Is it you markedly suck?
Stick to cooking Chef KSP!
You'll never be talented,
You'll always ramble,
You'll want to become more than just a moron,
You'll feel better when you quit posting this crap.
The only thing owed me is a swift kick.
Question was asked, I pointed in the right direction. If that means I'm assuming someone was guilty of being hopelessly dim and unworthy, then I guess I'm such a judgemental bastard.
Your Welcome dear,
<3 Jason
No offence - but please try a different form of expression.Poetry is just not your cup of tea.
Are you for real?
I Will Always Feel Complete While Your In My Life.
Yep.
I don't know. I couldn't get myself to finish the whole thing.
Silent Scream is such an easy oxymoron.
I know its an adverb but I just thought I'd try it as a noun,like daybreak,red-letter day,bygone or past...
seems more dramatic this way?Or not?
This poem is one of the longer ones I've read. But, as long as it was for me, I kept reading. That's good. Typos I could have done without, but otherwise, lovely.
Yea.
Um. Well the words "letting go issues" comes to mind, but who am I to judge. It's a 5 for me, Bob.
Ah, I couldn't help it. It actually made me smirk a little.
Hmm. We've all felt like that at one point or another.
I won't vote on this because poems that I like I tend to hand out 8's to. But whether or not the world's 8 is the same is mine, well I don't know. But I will say that I like this. Reminds me of the stuff you'd find in Cobain's journal.
Do you mean for "was" to be a noun?
You are - though they did actually make the mistake once of publishing a poem called "The Silent Scream" in an anthology entitled "Mind Mutations".