CommentsComments 26041–26060 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

BigB on come with me by darylchew 30 Aug 2004, 6:43 AM
utopia! i feel the euphoria!
some deleted user replying on abortion by darylchew 30 Aug 2004, 5:27 AM
I have never been pregnant myself and due to some horrible accident at birth will probably never be. However I feel a certain part of me has died when hark the dire whining sound of abortion cometh from my bowels.
I love it, but I think you could punctuate here: "no arm's/no arms' way out" somewhere after "is Art a way" and "root on the spot".
You know, I wasn't so sure about it myself. It's traditional cheese.
TAMARAG67 on come with me by darylchew 29 Aug 2004, 7:15 PM
When can we leave? I'm packing a bag-
TAMARAG67 on abortion by darylchew 29 Aug 2004, 7:06 PM
powerful and haunting
INTRANSIT replying on What Has It Gotten Us? by Dovina 29 Aug 2004, 12:42 PM
I'm all for women's lib. If they can do for themselves, that's less I gotta do. I'm mildly chauvy today. Chauvy chase?
Dovina replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 29 Aug 2004, 12:06 PM
Although my thinking seems excellent sometimes, it will likely change, possibly turning today’s excellence into tomorrow’s foolishness.
SupremeDreamer on Requiem for what by Prince of Void 29 Aug 2004, 10:11 AM
Ok, let me be frank, and brutally honest: The above enjambment of badly-stringed catch phrases is such a crock of discombobulated bullshit. Hopefully time will be forgiving, or there's no hope for you, whatever spouse you've become attached to, and your bastard children. You pray, I growl. Blessed with two.. go in peace.
Dovina on Haunted by Bachus 29 Aug 2004, 9:45 AM
"Like a book read too much" That's the way these memories are. Why can't we just let them lie?
Dovina on Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer 29 Aug 2004, 9:39 AM
Ah, to seduce him as a female Mephistopheles devil, kind but candid, unlike the women who have nothing of value to say.
Dovina on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 29 Aug 2004, 9:08 AM
Very nice. The last line seems redundent or not needed.
Dovina on Andrew by Spindle 29 Aug 2004, 9:04 AM
Too much cliche.
Dovina replying on What Has It Gotten Us? by Dovina 29 Aug 2004, 8:59 AM
And less than I bargained for, too. Overall, women’s lib has helped women, but it has its moments.
Prince of Void on abortion by darylchew 29 Aug 2004, 6:48 AM
that's was good ..
darylchew replying on abortion by darylchew 29 Aug 2004, 6:32 AM
they wont literally come and bite us. but probably more of our conscience doing the work. guilt is a powerful tool. but if the foeti really come back it'll be really cool. ><. everytime we abort A FOETUS (take note it is not someTHING), of course we are aborting a part of ourselves. it is our own flesh and blood for god's sake. the foetus lived in OUR wombs.
INTRANSIT replying on Haunted by Bachus 29 Aug 2004, 5:34 AM
I stuck with the water theme too long on that last one, didn't i.
INTRANSIT on Haunted by Bachus 29 Aug 2004, 5:17 AM
Do you think/feel it is somehow your duty to guide those who follow your work? Picked up O.B. o A. P. Spot on, as usual.
INTRANSIT on What Has It Gotten Us? by Dovina 29 Aug 2004, 5:14 AM
look up: more than i bargained for.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 29 Aug 2004, 4:46 AM
The only thing I acknowlege is my own excellence.