Dovina
replying on Q For Some Reason by MacFrantic
18 Aug 2004, 4:41 PM
cabernet savenoign. My spell checker's broke and my head itches, guess I'll scratch
Not a single English error that I can see. Wish I could do as well in another language. A good message for poetry and probably comes through as such in your native tongue. English is a clumbsy thing.
*8* ^^ nice
WOW...*speechless* thats beautiful ^^ *10*
I really liked reading you poem.
I found this a quite interesting poem, I loved verse six.
I understand, please forgive me for that. English is not my mother language but I love it so much that I just have to try to write in English :)
The poem means a lot to me, it's about a very special person in my life.
Thanks for the vote by the way :)
Epic
very good that's a nice poem...i like it
very good ..that's a nice poem ..i like it
Prince of Void
replying on Deep inside silence of a dark breeze by Prince of Void
18 Aug 2004, 5:37 AM
What do u mean by that ?
Xanax, Prozac, Zoloft are all little Dutch boys with their fingers in the dyke. The dyke is Swiss cheese. The water is full of hungry mice and we are all living on the edge of Disneyland. Know a good pharmacist?
The old long boarder(10'6") understands the last four lines best.
Unusual. A chorus that is longer than the verse.
A is for artichoke (less phallic than asparagus). Your trip to Ireland has made you a consummate toastmistress. Make mine Merlot. -9-
-10- for "God is most certainly in everything we choose to miss."
Is it Uranus?